WOOOOO! THE BITCH IS DEAD!

Quite a few typos, but a good story. Very emotional. I don't know if it requires an M rating, T would do just fine.

Well done,

I enjoyed that.

aw

YES GO FILLMORE GO FILLMORE

as long as this is fixed im happy

hm this is a very interesting story...i hope fillmore is there for her cause you always need someone to lea on

okay my assessment on her is...She. Is. A. BITCH!

All right, there were a few things I found that should have been kept into consideration with this chapter. 1) Ingrid Third has a very strong character. I don't think she should have been portrayed in as feminine a fashion as she was. 2) Dealing with the same issue, she could have put up a better fight against Celia considering her experience with the Safety Patrol and her distinct knowledge that goes who knows how far. And 3) The way I've seen Ingrid Third was as a human being prone more to expressing herself through mocking sarcasm rather than sadness. I just wish she could be more of a lioness rather than a cat because that is what her character is. Anyhoo, just thought I'd let you know that. But all those points aside, this story is pretty interesting :) Same as before though, the grammatical mistakes weren't particularly appreciated, but I managed to look through them and I see this story having a great amount of potential :D Can't wait to read more!

It's simplistic, I'm afraid I can't say I liked the grammatical mistakes. But the idea behind this story is what's driving me to continue reading :) I have to take some admiration as to the fact that you're writing a story based off of the Fillmore series. It was just recently while I was watching the show that I began to think to myself: "What would a romance between them be like?" And one of the things that came to mind was that it would most definitely have some angst to do with it and from what I saw in the summary, it looks like there is going to be some. So in finding this fic, it seems I killed two birds with one stone You got me hooked, now I'm going to keep reading

Nice story.

I'm not usually a sucker for happy endings... but I am a sucker for brilliant endings, just like this one. ;)

Didn't see the 'Celia killing herself' part coming, but it was realistic anyway. Epilogue was short tho. D:

And you guessed it, I shall fave... later, 'cause I'm too lazy to log in. XD

Took you 3 years, but it was worth it, wasn't it? :D

Squeal! Late cliffy, but what the heck.

And thank you for explaining Celia's character. I got confuzzled earlier...

-runs to Ch. 11-

I agree. This is one of your better chapters... -suspensemusic- If I like how this ends, I'll fave it. :D

Within 10 minutes, the grammar improved and the detailing got better - yay!

Is confuzzled tho... how was Ingrid led to smoking?