Well, I’m very glad the boys talked it out maturely... but poor girl...

Skskskskssk males are always so silly

"Do you not love her, my Lord?"
"No, I do not."

lyla nooooooooo :(

Fort Collins!

Glorfindel you idiot. Still love ya, but that was stupid

Take a shower before you meet Glorfindel bae now will ya

A lovely story of finding love! !

bit cliché

Usually I'm don't like when two people likes the same person but I like your style of writing so I keep reading and after each chapter I liked more and more you story. I'm so happy that Glorfindel and Lyla are finally reunited ! I will read the sequel of their story :)

That policeman was a wonderful man. We need more people like that in this world.
[I'm re-reading this story because I loved it so much the first time!]

This is so funny. Two males making plans for a female who is oblivious to them. I feel sorry for Elhael. She is starting to have feelings for Glorfindel.

I imagine Glorfindel to look like 90s male model David Boals.

Yay! So excited! I recently reread both Ancient Languages and Marks of Time. Can't wait for more chapters!

Awesome! I have honestly loved reading both! Fabulous work!

I love how you only hint to the making of love and refrain from delving into porn. I have great respect for authors that do that. And, it also keeps the ritual symbolic. It's a beautiful thing. Wonderful chapter!