His story is more tragic as he never got rescued like Anakin did.

Oh. It's so true. Whenever I watch Ep III, I always think at the end that Obi-Wan must be so sad. You've caught it really well, along with his moment of weakness but then how his strength kicks back in. This is really lovely.

This is very believable. I have a fic that explores some of the themes here, particularly that Obi-Wan had been too young yet to train a Padawan. And indeed, no one helped him and his own Master obligated him. But Obi-Wan would never blame him. At least, not openly. Off to read more of your work.

This story is beautiful in its composition. The way you wrote Obi-Wan was perfect, with the perfect mixture of agony and hope. A strong piece.

That was so sad! I want to cry! Poor Obi *sniff* ~obi's mom

WOW!

Omg this is incredible!

I love Obi-Angst-stories and this is one of the best I've ever read here!

Breath-taking, you really know how to capture a moment!

So dark. So deep. So sad. Dramatic!

Drove me almost to tears.

Amazing fic, thanks for posting!

Wonderful work!

Wow, that's dark. And really good, I like it. Very deep. Wonderful job.

You write emotion so well. I love the Obi-angst. You're perfect at characterizing him. :)

Heartbreakingly sad. A good capture of Obi-Wan's grief at the end of Episode I. Well written.

phantom_jedi

Your fics are incredible, living and breathing worlds that vibrate with pure emotion. And since that emotion is pure angst, I really enjoy them! Angst is always fun in some perverse way. I love the story, love how Obi-Wan blames himself (and how could he not? That's cetral to his loveable Obiness) and I love how he momentarily thinks of killing dramatic.

Xtine

Wah, that was so sad. I know that Obi-Wan probably felt like he was responsible for all those things you wrote about because that was his character but I still believe that he was the greatest Jedi Knight. Your writing is very good.