Reviews for Emptiness
BellaBlack23 chapter 1 . 3/5/2014
let him safe you! can you please write a really long lily/james fanfic! please 3
CanisMajor13 chapter 1 . 5/31/2010
You are a fantastic writer.
FalselyTrue chapter 1 . 11/27/2009
Sad, with a sweet ending, and I'm not going to say the word, 'cause I don't want to get slapped, so...*googles synonyms for bittersweet* it was poignant.

I like this James and Lily fic.

Luna
Rob-girl chapter 1 . 10/25/2008
I loved this story. It was amazing. I'm kind of in a weird position, because I absolutely LOVE your writing, I think you're absolutely amazing, but a lot of your pairings are Remus/Lily, and I just don't like that pairing! It's hard, but to find a story you've written where James is the good guy is absolutely wonderful! Thanks for writing!
Lady Nightfeather chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
another story to fall in love with!
Lily x James 4 eva chapter 1 . 6/14/2005
Is that it?I'm still surprised that you have 155 stories!I have four! AND I'VE ONLY WRITTEN 2 OF THEM!
Noodlejelly chapter 1 . 6/3/2005
I most certainly like it. Not amazingly happy or humourous which I always find painfully unrealistic, nor was it so angsty that there weren't moments of light and hope, a delightful medium.

I don't like many L/J fics (I find most of them too happy and out of character) but I'll make an exception for this one. Nice one.
livingdead2010 chapter 1 . 12/29/2004
It was great! gREAT DISCRIPTIONS! LOVE IT!
Mar chapter 1 . 12/10/2004
Wow. That was really good. It was simple, but it explains emotions really well. I've read the one from James' P.O.V too. Could you possibly write either a story or another companion piece telling us how it ends up? You've definitely left me wondering how it'll go!
soccerchic1989 chapter 1 . 12/8/2004
It was really great! I loved it! Hope you have some more L/J stuff soon!
J.E.A.R.K.Potter chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
Great story! Very powerful!-(Erin)J.E.A.R.
MPPMaraudergirl chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
Fantastic. Simply fantasticly written; fantastic meaning; fantastic everything. You never fail to amaze me and make me think. :) Bravo. Now how about something from James' P.O.V.? :)
myspeedingpulse chapter 1 . 12/7/2004
*Gulps* Ok, all your fics are good, but this was incredible, I wish I could say I had written that.
tobedeleted9 chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
*shock* Gorgey porgey! Loved it, and the characterization of Lily is perfect. The minute details about her parents and personality really help you get /into/ the story. Kudos! Omg, I just said 'kudos.' Gott in himmel, save me.

Huffah and the maddest of props to you,

Ta~

*Austin
TinyAndSassy chapter 1 . 12/6/2004
You worded it so well. You didn't have a specific character writting the story, nor did you have really anyone. It showed your voice very well, and you could be a great free verse poet one day.
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