beautifully written.

I don't think that I have ever read such an amazing loz one shot. And I've read many. This enraptured me from the beginning and took me on such an emotional roller coaster. Zeldas development was incredible to read and I was on the edge of my seat when she was going to kill ganondorf. And the last line was mildly expected but so perfect for the story and made a lil bit of my heart break for poor Zelda and everything she went through.

Have you read A Song of Ice and Fire? Or watch Game of Thrones? X

Wow, this was really brilliant! I happen to like mythology and with this being a LoZ story, that made it even better! Characterization was top-notch, Plot was deep, Character development was superb (Zelda), Grammar was spotless! Hope to read more from you!

I love this, and I think you did the notion justice.

I really enjoyed reading this. It was beautifully written. I'm adding this to my favorites immediately. Thank you for writing this.

Absolutely breathtaking. I understand that this was based off a play but you captured each character so well in their entirety. Kudos. 10/10

A wonderful homage to the (literal) classics. I always sided with Klytemnestra, too.

Wow.

I am a GanZel shipper. And this is spectacular.

Sometimes, they can have a romance that will turn them both the better for it.

But other times? You get genius like this.

That last line was the best line of all. I almost anticipated it, but to see Zelda knife Ganondorf like that was class.

Nice. Instafav.

wow! u r an amazing writer! this was an awesome short story, and the ending was PERFECT! i loved this so much! great job!

Beautifully written. Very refreshing. Good job ).

Totally awesome. This was one, BRILLIANT tragedy.

I found this to be very powerful. I can feel the emotion pouring out through the words and it captures me. Grips me to my seat until the end. Your words played me like a violin. I couldn't tear myself away from this even if the house was burning down. You unleashed a relentless force with your representation of Zelda and Ganondorf, and I am blown away. You did a great job! I am most impressed. I wish you *did* own Legend of Zelda so that you could set the course of the storyline of the series. I bet you would have saved me from Wind Waker(even though it is a great game in some aspects.) I must depart for bed at this time, but I shall return to read Hyrule Tournament over again and then read Heroes of Hyrule again (both of which I demanded my best friend read earlier tonight). G'night!

~Shane

Amazing.

Interesting...I'm slightly disturbed. If that's what you were aiming for, good job. You succeeded. Nice job.

~Lucky~