I dont get this chapter a scientist calls out for help then suddenly Grodin is unconscious. You need to explain how he suddenly became unconscious, people dont just become unconscious.

This was really great! I liked how you captured Kavanaugh...kinda making him the bad guy but without character bashing.

Wonderful!

Aww, gotta love Becket )

Great story. Nice to see that Kavangh as well decent for a change. Great plot and OCs

Fantastic story. Great story premise _

Great Story!

Awesome story! Who's Luka?

Wow~~ truly awesome story ]

had me on the edge of my seat...well, bed, but you know what I mena, for quite a few nights trying to get to the end of this!

very nice

kai x

Wow-

What a well-written story! Good pacing, good dialogue, good plot! I have to admit, I was getting ready to give up on "fanfic" because even though it is well-intentioned it is often so amatuerish that it is more frustrating than enjoyable. I am glad I came across your story-it makes the hunt for other tales as well done more fun!

Barbie

awsome story you have here, great plot i must say.

so keep on it, write more stories!

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chris

That was cool :)

Poor Rodney, I like it when someone's out to get him...

Thanks

That was such a great story! I love it. So great. You are an excellent writter and you did amazing work!

Good story. I love your tales of adventure. I was very surprised that Shep was whumped. It wasn't in the summary and I thought the story was all about Mckay. Good surprise there.

Thanks for the fun.

Wonderful story :P