| Reviews for Clean Up |
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Solia chapter 1 . 4/7/2018 Oh my gosh I LOVE this 3 I can't believe it didn't get more attention, it's so beautifully written and has so much feeling. I know it's been forever since you wrote it, and I had a peek at your profile and saw you don't write FF anymore, but in the off-chance you still get updates from this site, I wanted to let you know someone read your writing today and thought it was fantastic, and I wanted this great fic to have at least one extra review it deserves. So much to love! It's real and then it's charming and then it's funny and then it's heartfelt. Your Jack and Daniel are spot-on, both individually and as a dynamic. Your Jack sounds like Jack in his dialogue and your Daniel sounds and behaves like Daniel (I can see him in my mind's eye just from your description of his body language), but then beyond that, they *feel* like Jack-and-Daniel, so much going unsaid, so much water under the bridge yet still innately trusting of the other. You captured them perfectly. Thanks for this lovely read! |
PBIceCream chapter 1 . 3/8/2012 Well written, with a nice hopeful note at the end. Thank you! |
Fortune Zyne chapter 1 . 2/11/2006 Ah, how cute. |
whichlinkdidyousave chapter 1 . 12/5/2004 This was a really good tag. It really wrapped the episode up. Thanks for that. |
Braycat chapter 1 . 11/18/2004 Wonderful story that really brings closure to an episode that desperately needed it. Jack and Daniel desperately needed to find their friendship again and you gave them that back. Thanks for that. |