I like it, it's really good.

But there's one big problem: the ending's a bit of a cop-out. It was as if someone was bricked up into a chinmey and conjured up a jackhammer out of thin air. So it gets 8/10. Sorry.

aw great story, i was sat at the edge of my seat. so glad Nicole recovered. your stories are really good. congrats!

aw...you kept your word and made it happy at the end! Hurrah!

aw no this was lovely, don't hurt the fic. The second from last chapter made me really panicky. A relief to have a nice ending. Very well done.

Yay! So relieved! We loved this fic even if you didn't, my dear, so be proud of that.

God, this is powerful stuff. Brought back haunting dreams of my fiance dying and not being able to do anything about it. Really strong emotions here. Amazing stuff, please update soon

*Sobs* No! I don't believe it! Not after everything they've been through!

I'm feeling a very confusing mix of emotions, firstly Cat and Gins wedding (so sweet) loved the "preco…preccy…pre…”

“Precarious,” Lister coughed' bit, had me in hysterics...but then...Nicole...that poor girls had it fairly tough...a quite upsetting chapter but nothing short of brilliant!

That's so sad! Why did you have to make that happen? Gr! You just write in such a style it makes me depressed! It's still brilliant though. :D

I'm about to burst into tears here! Why did you stop it there?

NO! Good chapter though, very scary and sad in parts, still v. upset but you've mentioned something happy in the upcoming chapter so..i'm holding on for the happiness!

can't...stop...reading...! Loved that 'Good God, no!' bit!

YYAY LOVE CAT! Very sweet!

No! No no no! You can't kill them! Save them! Save them!

HOW CAN YOU END IT THERE? I am on the very edge of my seat in anticipation...I’ve got no finger nails left and i'm dying (cough, cough) to know how on earth this will sort itself out...please make it happy...or at least happier...please...pretty please...great chapter!