WE WANT MORE RIGHT NOW PLEASE AUTHOR

You really need to use spacese cause it's very hard to read but like it so far u have to cut the text up instead of a big on u will get more readers if u fix it

this was good and I would like to see him in RavenClaw

I've always loved fantasy. Y not check google for gods/goddesses?

ambrosia, the house for decendants of merlin and sure, make ron and hermiony friends with draco put em in slytherin, and make en EEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEVIL

First, if he is trained as a god, he should be almost omnipotent.

Unless his father is dark/evil and can show Harry why he should also be evil, I can't see Harry being evil.

Need to update/finish story.

hey! Good story you have there. Though I would suggest you break up the writing in to paragraphs, as it makes it a little hard to read. But keep up the good work.

One of the most confusing fics out there. For one the author ends a paragraph with quotes but then has the same same speaker continuing talking without noting who is talking. If it is the same speaker the end of a paragraph should be left quote mark free with the start of the next paragraph with quotes to continue the conversation, only ending the final paragraph with quotes when the person is done talking. Second, introduction of characters not of HP world and yet nothing by way of who the hell they are. A short intro would be nice on the AU you are either inventing or crossing over too.

this is a cool idea and all and for the record this is like my first ever flame like comment...have you ever heard of a paragraph...i mean i'm not one to complain just check my early work its bad...you need a beta bad dude...great idea though

wow! do you have any knowledge of what paragraphs are used for? kuz you dont seen to kbow what they are never mind the used of them ...

dtyju

I was wondering when you're going to update.

Harry should be dark!Harry should be dark!Harry should be dark!

How many times should I say it?

god stroy wish they were longer or a little more detailed update soon

Mein Gott you updated. The chapter was interesting, if short. As for the gods, the gods Sumeria, Baal, Mot, Tiamat, or Lilith Lovecrafts the Great Old ones like Cthulu, the Gods of Ireland Daghda, Lugh. Wikipedia can be used to look up other ones, you could use the Native American spirits or you could use other members of the pantheons like from the Norse Magni or Athena from the greek. I look forward to your up date. Ciao.