| Reviews for Visiting Kyoto |
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   MakKeiUra chapter 4 . 5/17/2019 Just wanted to let you know that I appreciate this story for getting so much Aoyama magic started. ;) |
| Guest chapter 2 . 4/28/2018 Fuck Motoko! Fuck Motoko! Fuck Motoko! Fuck Motoko! Fuck Motoko! I hope she dies and goes to hell! |
| Y-PenDraig chapter 2 . 8/8/2015 Hey Hawk, I enjoyed your story pretty well. I did try to PM you as I am in the middle of writing a TsuXKei story, though it takes place after tsu meeting kei the first time and helping Motoko, mine is a tad bit on the darker side it does Have some similarities to your story of Visiting Kyoto, not exactly but i does have similarities. To that end I was wondering as your story seems to be discontinued would you mind if I adopted your story or do you plan to pick it up again in the future? |
| RAW19 chapter 4 . 1/31/2014 I keep coming back to this story as it never gets old. Loved this chapter and hope there will eventually be more! |
| Warrior Moon Okiro Zangetsu chapter 4 . 5/17/2013 Even if it takes forever to update this fic, that is how long i will wait for it. |
| APG66 chapter 4 . 1/31/2013 Just read this and a couple of your other stories, and wish you would update them though i know its unlikely since its over 5 years since the last update |
| Lord Mortensen chapter 4 . 1/28/2013 awesome! update soon! |
| Officer Hotpants chapter 4 . 1/27/2013 MORE! I DEMAND MORE! I love this version of Tsuruko. |
| Nysk chapter 4 . 10/29/2012 MORE PLEASE! |
| Ragnarok chapter 1 . 9/25/2011 One major problem I have with all these Tsuruko/Keitaro fics. Yours included. The whole reason Motoko hates men is because her sister married a man, and she didn't approve of it. That's also why she ran away to the Hinata House. |
| leroygordon chapter 2 . 6/3/2011 SICK! PERVERTED! And I'm just howling at how funny this entire story is. I LOVE it. Especially the way Tsuruko is yanking Motoko's chain. Perfect! |
| Zexs chapter 4 . 11/26/2010 Please update there is so much potential |
| T3Ko chapter 4 . 11/1/2009 Heheh. Nice one. Thanks, |
| SilverIceRing chapter 4 . 9/23/2009 Ha! This stuff is halarious! Why you haven't updated in so long is way beyond me! Hope you decide to change your mind and come back to it sometime! Ja ne! |
| gambit chapter 4 . 4/7/2009 I was about to add to the general clamour ("write moar! plzz! |
