| Reviews for Neptune's Ocean |
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Anonymous chapter 5 . 6/15/2017 It's ok |
Guest chapter 15 . 1/31/2017 Omg I love it! |
Alvinthechipmunk chapter 14 . 8/24/2015 Im died meat once i get home |
Alvinthechipmunk chapter 12 . 8/24/2015 Why would she want to leave with me |
Alvinthechipmunk chapter 7 . 8/20/2015 I cant come bk after what i did to you teddy |
Alvinthechipmunk chapter 2 . 8/16/2015 Im so sorry little buddy we will miss you and ik i dont say this enough... But i love you teddy |
Alvinthechipmunk chapter 1 . 8/16/2015 Nooo not teddy |
Jigsaw1234 chapter 1 . 2/21/2013 great chapter |
Green Raccoon chapter 1 . 12/30/2012 Fantastic story. I really enjoyed this a great deal. |
Jigsaw1234 chapter 7 . 9/10/2012 this chapter no this story is Awesome my friend just magniffisint |
Shina0017 chapter 16 . 7/1/2012 Amazing story! When I first saw the description, I put off reading it because I didn't think I'd like it. Then I saw it was on so many people's favorites! So, I had to try it, and I am so glad I did! You're an amazing author! This has such an original and creative plot. The characterization is perfect! I love it! |
Spring-Heel-Jaq chapter 16 . 1/4/2011 I have come across this story many, many times and I really enjoyed it! The plot line was perfect and smooth. The characters seemed to be in place and enjoyable. The drama, action, romance and other expressions really got to me as if I was there in person. I really enjoyed the description very well and emotions were dimensional! I truthfully couldn't get enough of it! Though I did spot a few grammar errors along with fragment sentences and passive wording . . . and I was curious if I could edit those? Like a reviewer has stated, what is the purpose of the title? Is it because Alvin ran away to London, whereas the ocean separating both North America and Europe is the Atlantic? Where Neptune is the ruler of "Atlantis" which is supposedly located in the Atlantic? Correct me if I'm wrong. Yes, I think you should do a sequel, if you're not doing it now. |
Amon23 chapter 16 . 4/23/2010 Alvin was officially announced as the oldest in the cartoons...but that doesn't matter right now! This story is too "AWESOME" for that to matter. Weather he is the oldest or not, This story is the most touching, descriptive, and all around best AaTC story I have ever read. I am "BEGGING" you to continue writing like this! If you do, you could become a great author, and actually publish some books! Keep up the "Great" work! (Sorry for the long review!) |
DeathByStereo17 chapter 16 . 1/4/2009 aw, i have tearz in my eyez right now. since i have started to read this story i have barely been able to tear my eyez away from it. it waz so weel written, and i felt like i waz sharing some of the emotion the Chipmunkz were feeling. awesome job! |
Geek in Sequins chapter 1 . 6/23/2008 I must say, this is the best fan fiction I have ever read. You took the time, (and had the talent,) to make this piece novel quality. I love how everyone reacts realistically, in character, to a situation that never would have surfaced in the original series. |