Really great! This would have been excellent in the movie. Great job!

Love it, so sweet!

Good take on that scene. That is probably what alot were thinking. It would be nice to really know that you made a difference and that people believed in you and not following what the Bugle says. Keep up the good work.

Ah man. I don't know how you did it, but you made me cry! Maybe its because this story is so damn nice. I just love it when he finally gets appreciated!

Touching and very nice.

Nice to have someone recognize the burden. Good job.

Wow. This wasn't good.

This was...

AMAZING!

They should have done this in the movie. It really pulls at the heartstrings.

Aw! I love this! They SO should have done this in the movie! :D

it is so beutiful. I cannot forget the train scene, the one that inspires us on and on, a powerful metaphore of love.

You said it in a so beautiful manner. thank you.

and invite you to have a look at our story "My intimate Spiderman' It also starts on that train...

Wow! Short but sweet. I loved that train scene, great piece of film history. The only fault I have to pick in your story is the way Peter messes up the little kids hair. Don't ask me why, it just annoys me. Anyways, it's a great story and keep on writing! More Spidey fics please!

aww that was really good, nice change

This was nice. I enjoyed it.

"He did all this without knowing how much an impact he has left on the people he helped... Soon you could see a change in his face, he probably never heard a single thank you for his deeds."

Short but sweet. Really enjoyed it .