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love the last line of the chapter it makes me want to aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwwww forever

great i love this and also i do like cliff-hangers that is until i get the infamous what happens next feeling

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ooooh cliff-hanger i luuuuuuuuuuuv cliff-hangers but i usually read the next chapter imeadiatly after it because other-wise i end up w/book-withdraw
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Please tell me there will be more chapters, I want Legolas to be reunited with his people and his father.

PLZ Continue!

fuck. you havent updated since 01-28-05!

please continue SOON! :(

ack! I must have more~ I must must must!

-Celebdil

Hi! I love your story! But why did Legolas's eyes go yellow and the orcs eyes go green? IS LEGOLAS AN ORC AND THE ORC AN ELF? Wait, does that make sense? No, but who cares? Nothing I say has ever made sense and now is no time to change it! So, anyway, lets just say that the real Legolas is the Elfy Orc and the fake one is the orc that looks like Legolas but came with Estel and then the flying blender came and chopped off Saruman's head with a sharp pair of zigzag scissirs and then Elrond ran in after eating too much sugar and jumped up and down giggling hysterically with a super-powered-mad-thingy-chainsaw and chopped everyone's head off. Good story, eh? Please reply and read my stories which should be up starting Tuesday the 22nd coz I'm a new member so I can't do stories till Monday and I won't have time till Tuesday ... Oh no! Here come the nasty men in white coats again! Run away! *Runs off shrieking madly and giggling hysterically with a burst of evil manical laughter at the end*

This story just seems like an excuse to write torture. It seems rushed, like you didn't take enough time with your beta to make sure the grammar and spelling were all right- this is essential, seeing as run on sentences and such just drive a reader nuts. I don't know, it just feels so unrealistic at times.

I've read stories of this same calibre but with plots that were much better developed. Take a visit to the Mellon Chronicles site for some great ones by Cassia and Sio, Aragornwriter, and others. Just try to take more time thinking so that you can come up with an original idea, one less confusing and stuff that seems less like others. I was looking over your reviews and must say that I agree with Gwyn of the Shire on the improvements you should make. As she said, it isn't a flame. You have good ideas and obviously love to write. Just keep going and you'll get there. I myself have been writing for very many years, and am looking into publishing with an agent, and I know that it isn't easy.

I think you have potential. I will continue to follow this story and look forward to seeing improvement. Just look at some of Gwyn of the Shire's ideas, they'll help a lot. Reviews like that, I have found, can help a heck of a lot to improve the story.

~o~o~germanclarinet~o~o~

WRITE MORE! Need more torture...torture good...(dun ask me why i like to read torture storys about leggi.)

Please update this story.

no bad cliffie! you've inspired me to try and write more lotr stuff *cough* like that'll ever happen. Oh well! i luv this story! please continue writing. i dont like the cliffie this time cuz the next chap. isn't already posted. grr. alright bye!

-LostChickenWednesday723-