All I can say is awwww

You might want to put this under T rated, but other than that; I love it! Squee! Never liked Ed/Al before, but sheesh... you people on Fanfiction are getting me addicted to it! XD

Kara

Sweet. It's nice. Short yet it get it's message across. I love it!

Very good! Yeah, luv it!

Hm... very nice! Short, but sweet. But I do suggest one thing. You might wanna put a warning about Elricest on the summary and/or Author's Notes before the ficcie starts, 'cause I noticed a lot of complaining. I think what you wrote is perfectly fine, but still, a " don't like, don't read " sign in bold would probably be a good idea.

Anyway, keep up the good work!

- Black Cherry Youkai #29

The FLUFF! The utter and complete FLUFF! Must. Make. Schweet. LURVE to the fluff!

Two thumbs up.

Aw, I wish it was longer. Damn your New England heritage that has an issue of morals and conscience... well it can't be help. Wonderful fic.

OMG! You screwed up Ed and Al...It was the best story I've ever read...But I don't like have the potential and talent of a writer!I'm begging you!Please write an Ed x Winry fic!

*sob* *sob* *sob*

[incest sucks, man, but gay incest dude...That's

not cool...]

I'm not a big fan of incest...BUT THIS WAS GOOD! _ When has Ed ever been that...um...forceful?

Me:Cute! And sweet, and very fluffy! It expresses little, yet so much!

Bass:*Mutters under breath* She's hopeless.

Dumas:*Mutters back* I agree with you there.

Izumi:Has anyone seen Ed and Al? I was sure that they would be here by now, they said they would be here now.

Bass:I know how to figure out of Ed and Al are here.

Dumas:How?

Bass:Simple. *Yells* CALLING ALL MIDGETS, CALLING ALL MIDGETS NAMED ED!

Ed:*Yells* WHO ARE YOU CALLING A MIDGET BASS?

Al:Brother, you shouldn't yell inside.

Izumi:*Shakes her head* Yep, you definetely found them alright. By the way, what did Ed think about this story?

Bass:He said that it was a somewhat strange story, but he loves his brother in a brotherly way, not like...the other way.

Me:I'll go and make dinner now. Bass, do you want your hamburgers with or without pickles?

Bass:No pickles this time, I threw up last time I ate them.

Izumi:Wasn't that only because Ed put vinegar on your pickles and you were allergic to that?

Dumas:He's being cautious, he's afraid that Ed will put vinegar in his pickles again because he always calls Ed a midget and a pipsqueak.

GAH. This is so pretty! It's always a pleasure to discover new Elricest fics, especially if they're good. I'm adding this story to my favourites. Thanks for sharing it!

GAH! WHY DO I KEEP READING THESE!

IM THE ANTI-SLAH CRUSADER FOR ZARK'S SAKE!

That was a really good story, *i can t belive im saying this* WRITE MORE!

i generally dislike slash but that was really good and i want to read more! (I cant wait to show to Squee, Purple and Prancer, OMZ theyll love this fic! )

very god story, awesome writing!

*adds to favourites list*

*throws lizards of congradulations*

-Ix, the anti-slah crusader.

Aw so sweet yet sad, I like _ there's not enough with these two together!

Nice fic, well-written, catching. I'm not really sure of what else to say.

I agree with Zade about the whole homosexual incest thing. I don't completely see the point of why society views it as so 'wrong', it's not as if they're bearing children with deformities or brain damage due to the incest, and it's not like most states would let them get married or acknowledge themselves in a civil union anyways... Che, people should just quit getting up in other people's business, but for your sake I won't turn this into a rant. ;; - -''

*Squeals loudly* Oh, how impossibly adorable! Almost sad, but cute. Heh, it's one of the first FMA stories I've read, and I liked it! _ Thank you!

-Kloudy Reignfall