An interesting story. Kinda dark, even for Mara, but it works.

wow i really like that

Draco122

SQUE!

I am freaking out because this is SO AWESOME!

It's both a sad and sweet story. :)

Hmm, I think there's a couple of missing words in it that could use correcting. Still readable, though.

Love Lora

I liked it alot. The only thing is, the beginning was very dark, poetic, and emotional. I really enjoyed that, in a way. But by the end it was back to mushy again. I like mush, but I felt it was too stark a contrast. Nice job though!

Nice job on this story! I don't want to be gross, but I really like angst stories... and when main characters get hurt. It makes it... more emotional. :) So anyways I think the end part starting about the time when they kiss could have been longer... but I still liked it alot! Very very nice job! Yay L/M!

WOW that was so sweet. I love it.

I really like this story allot, can't wait for more!

hahaha, that sounds like something i would write, except the kiss would be in more detail, and 'twould be..not luke.

Forgot something- yes the 6 paragraphs on her game are important. You weren't paying attention as you read the first few paragraphs describing Eliza.

“I’m going to die someday, farmboy, and so are you.”

This line sticks out to me so much. I just smiled when I read this, and even though earlier I had been like 'aagh she's going to die!' i knew when she said this that everything was going to be okay. Phew.. You really scared me there. Fantastic story, I loved it. Luke is one of my fav Star Wars characters and to see him so human was really quite nice. Some people seem to think of him as this all knowing jedi master (which he is) and forget that he is entirely human and loving. Beautiful story!

~anglachel

Great story!

I don't know whether to cry or cheer. So how about a standing o instead? This is an absolutely awesome story. You kept Luke and Mara perfectly in character, and I have a lot of rexpect for writers who can (and bother to) do that.

BTW, Who's Jem? I've never heard of her before.

Hey, Darth-Suzi,

that was very good. Although I balk a little at suicide fics, I thought your was quite sensible.

The only 'but' is that Jem and Gaeriel didn't trow Luke away. Gaeriel and Luke never started anything serious, Luke never got hurt by her. Jem died saving Luke's live. Only Callista really abandoned Luke, but it was much the fault of us Mara fans, who wanted Luke with 'teh red' and ended up making Callista go away. ;)

Dear Darth-Suzi,

GREAT JOB! I really liked this story. Especially how you got them together in the end! Keep up the great work!

~SailorLeia