I swear, YOU. MUST. UPDATE! PLEEEEASE!? I need moar!

It's a shame this story hasn't been finished... or won't. But at the same time... maybe good? I'm suspecting that you're turning Edward into the villain here...I'd rather it be Envy. Edward shouldn't be the villain. Envy most definitely. Ah well. Maybe someday?

Why did you stop updating? I really liked your fanfic and wish to read more!

I am absolutely amazed! Your writing is soooooooo good! Can't wait for the following chapters

Wish someone had told me about this fic sooner. I'm so into Emma and Campion and Jeeves&Wooster right now, anything from the 1890s - 1920s, that this totally captures my imagination. Thanks so much for the great dialogue, it's wonderfully in character and yet completely period. You're great, and I can't wait to finish this mystery and see what happens.

Hi! just wanted to say that i have been following your story on LJ and just found it here. I noticed you've written 10 chaps, but only 5 are here. Will you be updating with new chappies?

Really love the story, keep it up! I have a few theories and i cant wait to see if I'm right or not!

ZOMG! watwas envy trying to do to ed?

was he beating him up? is ed traumatized for life? did he see trisha's murder? TELL ME PLEASSE!

Hey there! When will you finish this story? Or at least post chapter six?

O... Who? Who? I'm guessing Envy. He looks like a murderer... he's a sore loser if you ask me and make me be nice about it.

omg omg omg I FOUND YOU! and this freaking amazing story! do you remember hime19? in deviantart I found some of her illustrations of your story...so I decided to read...but I only found 11 chapters or so...I AM SO glad its on fanfiction now! Best FMA fic I've EVER read. GREAT JOB!

-Miya

update soon

Aww... Hohenheim x Trisha 4ever! lol

Dante... ah, screw you. XD

Awesome chapter! I enjoyed it. :)

Awesome story! I found out about it due to Lizeth from deviantARt. Her picture was so awesome that I just had to check out the story behind it! YAY! Wonderful job!

~Nikki Kino

I've read this story on that other website, where it's posted up to and including chapter 10... it's so amazing! I suppose it's discontinued? If you came back to it, you would make the world a better place. Honestly.

:jawdrop: This as got to be *the* *BEST* FMA fic I've come across on the net! I'm really hoping you won't abandon it, it mean, how could you set up such an awesome mystery and *not* continue? Oh, and it would also be fab if you could update this to chapter 10 like in your LJ, seeing as some people can get story alerts here, but not from your LJ. Pretty please? Oh and based on spoilers for chap 10, I think I've solved the plot, but I'll never know for sure unless you update... It can be in 2 months, 2 years, anytime. :)

I originally found this story while searching the gallery of Hime19 who did some wonderful illustrations for it. It's a really original AU though I am wondering what is actually wrong with Ed. At first I thought his "spells" were just minor epileptic fits, but maybe there is something extra in the tonics he's given to drink.