Interesting. Hiei and Kanna are cute!

Not supposed to sleep if you have a concussion.

Ah, I see that you knew about the 'don't sleep with a concussion' thing. Good. I was worried that if you ever got a concussion (hope it doesn't happen, but IF) that you wouldn't know that you shouldn't sleep. I'm glad you know! O:D

There is a bunch of other stuff I was planning to say (all positive), but I'll save that for the last chapter. For now, ... Did you know it's dangerous to go to sleep with a concussion? You have to be monitored closely, or you run the risk of never waking back up.

So what happened to the jewel?

Ok, so I'm reading this and the whole time I was like "damn... that escalated quickly." XD Iol!

OMFG THATS SO FUNNY

Noo I wanted Hiei and Kagome pairing

But.. Hiei is cold and Kanna is even emotionless? What are you expecting ? QwQ..

Its kinda mean that you dont let the reader vote . but oh w3ll its your story..

I hate you! You need to make a sequel I'm gonna die if you don't! if you can't atleast make a story about kagome and kurama together with yusuke as her twin and only about kag and rama-kun not about kagome and yusuke's bond as a family. if u can't do wat i request atleast make a story of them kagome and kurama! Onegai onegai !

I love this story but a hoer you adding Kanna and Kagura I abhorred both characters I mean honestly you could have had shizuru and sesshomaru or something because like I said I ABHORE both kanna and Kagura and because you added them to the story I am unable to continue reading.
If you decide to rewrite this story at some point down the road I would appreciate a version that did not contain Kanna and Kagura or maybe having kagome purify them because I mean naraku is dead they should have died with him because they still are alive that would mean that naraku is still alive because they were grown or created from his body.
Which would technically mean that they have part of his soul inside them which would mean Sesshomaru and Hiei would technically be dating or mating with a guy.
I ADORED the first 8 chapters but when starting on reading the ninth chapter I saw and read the author note on the top and instantly stopped reading and started writing this review. I mean I love how you created the crossover and Hiei's attitude however I abhore the pairings. You are a fabulous writer so it's not the reason I stopped reading. I feel like I am repeating myself so I am going to end my review! (:

What! What do u mean there's gonna be no damn sequel! Here I was getting my hopes up! But nooo there isn't going to be any sequel! Damn it! I really wanted there to be one too! Its just not fair! Tons of people would read it! Please!

Nooooooo! Whyy no sequel! don't leave it like this pleasee!

FUNNY!

I liked it.