Well this sucks. I wanted to know what happens to them! Maybe I’ll continue it. Hmmmm... I think I will! Well, thanks for the beginning! This is gonna be fun!

On 8 & 9 there is no writing...

Can I adopt this story? I want to try and continue it. I really like it and I want to try to make it so Day is hiding a huge secret with how you left it.

I would love to see this story finished...

No! Please ,oh, Please , keep righting this story . You were doing really good!

You wound me

I LOVE IT!

Pike? Really you had to use that name? It's my last name!

awwwww man! this sucks

The name change is slightly confusing

Awesome story, I know u haven't written in a while but I know al least one person would be really really happy if u did! :)

I must say that Day, Ori & Tom have all seemed to have accepted the sudden changes within
there lives since they learnt that Severus was there father (and a vampire!) and that they
were triplets...yet there hasn' been any true emotional upset over learning the truth? Apart from the period where Day ran away and lived upon the streets with other street kids
...none of the triplets seemed to have asked just why they were adopted or attempted to
learn what happened to there mother Kendra? Sure'll the kids could learn something about
both there parents & the Snape family from the family house elves (if there are some?) or
perhaps family portraits of which most portraits seem very nosy?

Why were the kids named by there parents with the names chosen...do they have godparents
if so who are they? Whilst I can quite easily see the triplets in either Slytherin or
Ravenclaw...wonder just what house Kendra was in at Hogwarts if she attended that school
at all? Are there any other family members, aunts, uncles, cousins or grandparents?

I think the triplets should return to Hogwarts but keep there past identities hidden from
all but they'd need a very good reason/explanation of just why Hermione Granger, Harry
Potter & Draco Malfoy didn't return to school? Hmm...wonder just how Lucius & Cissy
Malfoy reacted to Draco/Tom's changes or did they know the truth? Just how close a
friends are Lucius & Cissy and which side are they & Severus truly on? Will Day tell
his siblings & father about the prophecy...if so, just how will they help him? Will
Severus learn the truth about exactly what his son Day's childhood was like with the
Dursleys...if so will he apologise & seek justice from the Dursleys?

Such a tragedy that you won't be continuing it. I liked how it was written, but I guess I know what you mean. TTFN.

Well, it is indeed a shame that you don't have inspiration for this story anymore. It's rather good. I like it quite a bit.

I put up one of my own stories for adoption and am now finally getting back into the writing game. So, if you want, I'll gladly take this story. I have a lot of others to do as well, but I believe I can handle this one as well. I'm trying to get more involved in the Harry Potter area of fanfiction and I think this would be a great start.

If you're worried about my writing skills, then just check out a few of my stories. I assure you that I am very good with grammar.

I certainly hope you'll consider letting me have this story.

it was a good chapter thank you i hope you the will to finch the story thanks