What a well-written story, Princess of Wands! I liked the buildup, the gradual increase in creepiness, and how you portrayed all of the characters. You gave Luna actual depth as a character, which I really appreciated.

Your a devil with a poison pen, and I love it kept making more

did Luna become weird again? I am totally in love with Luna, and I want her to be strange and normal!

My love for you grows, an ever-reaching tidal. No
Na̲me nor sound will slake my thirst for you. There
Is only one cure. I need your soul, your eyes calling for me, and
Ev̲e̲r̲y̲ story ever written will pale in the passion that we share.
Avery right? it's all i could find.

It reminds me so much of Phantom of the Opera. I've always thought Luna would be an excellent Christine. I love this!

The poem from chapter 5 second line: Name nor; nor backwards is ron. Names ron? Or did I miss it? xD

That was a perfect ending

I love this story! It's such a unique and creative idea, and I was hooked from the beginning! Great job!

Such an amazing cliff hanger!

Out of all this, I find the bears eyes the creepiest thing.

My name is every.
It's Avery!
Maybe.

Is it Neville?

gah! i knew it had to do with the first word of each line, but all i got was the first letters were an anagram for 'mine'. I feel like a fool. And this dude is creepy.

Intriguing story with what I suspect would be a plot twist.

Wow... Creepy stuff! Your story is really, really good- it's almost 2 in the morning and I'm so focused on finding out who this creeper is that I can't sleep!
I found one more hidden messages in your poem in Chapter 5!
Look on the very left side. All of the letters that start of a new line are letters in the word 'MINE'!
Freaky, eh? I pride myself on my work with words and letters- I'm like a walking, talking dictionary in a way.
I couldn't find the name- I don't think, at least.
What do you know of the word 'slake'? I don't really believe that it's a word...
Great story!