Hm... interesting... VERY interesting... XD Please update soon! I wanna know what happens next? They can't be dead! IT'S ALL A LIE! XD

Oh no, Lloyd did that same thing as Vader did in the end of Episode 3! Soon he's gonna start getting breathing problems, he already has the red laser sword!

Suzu: Updation!

Jet: Shut up!

Suzu: Hm, they AREN'T dead, since the lock of hair-

Jet: We could try NOT ruining it.

Lloyd: No way!

Jet: How'd you get in here?

Kratos: Me, Bozu.

Jet: HEY! (attacks)

Lloyd: No way!

Suzu: _ Meep. Read my 7th chapter soon, it's pretty good...um...great updation! Watch me say shortness! Sh-ort-nes. Cool, huh?

Jet: (badly beaten up yet Kratos is fine) No.

Suzu: Kratos?

Kratos: Bozu.

Jet: RAWR!

Suzu: _ Updation soon!

Skeith: (still hiding behind the rock) I'm nowhere!

Yeah, 'short' does rather describe it. Hehehehehehe...they died...that's funny.

Man dont take this the wrong way but stick to the story ,why did you killed Raine?ive wasnt able to propose her ,i will never get married now.

Josephine:Hey Art you cant marry a RPG character

Art:says who?

Joey:here on the "Things you cant marry to" rule book

Art:lets see rocks,hair,famous hair,ahh here it is RPGs characters:you cant marry a RPG

Joey:see

Art:wanna marry me?

you are sick

You seem to have some real verb-tense contradiction here... nothing major, though. No one's perfect. Besides, the content more than makes up for it! I've been looking at this story for a long time and have finally decided to read it. W00t for procrastination.

XD I love your ending note! I wish I had a Lloyd plushie... just to freak my dog out. XD

Aha... I wonder who "Yuan" really is... O_o Skeletons? Plastic toys! *cricket sounds* ...Um...yeah... What did you do with their bodies, you evil person? o Can't wait for your next chapter! Don't worry about the slowness; it's summer, after all.

THANK YOU SO MUCH FOR TAKING THE TIME TO TRANSLATE THE TRAILER! XD I can't say it enough. Thank you, thank you, thank you!

~Rayestar

they'd better not really be dead... :: growls ::

Ookiedokie, this is getting really weird, I did like the scene where Lloyd pounced on Zelos from his window, though...

Sorry it won't let me sign in...another two funny ass chapters! Zelos and Lloyd shocking each other was genious, I salute you. (salutes)

A date? That would be something I would want to see.

Wow! That's so awesome and funny! _ Oh, please please write more!

Raine? On a date? That's quite a feat... o

Oh my, what have you done with their clothes? Wait 'til Zelos gets there, hehe.

Yep, he has to protect his beautiful and sexy body, ne? And I'd have loved to see Lloyd try and do a Light Spear! Hahaha!

I can just imagine...

*Zelos and Lloyd come to a fork in the road*

Zelos: Okay Lloyd, which way are you gonna take?

Lloyd: Um...the left one!

Zelos: Good, because that means I'm going right!

Lloyd: !_! Hey, that's not fair! And mean too!

Zelos: Worth it if I can stop going in circles.

*hour later*

Zelos: Hey look! It's my buddy Lloyd!

Lloyd: I thought you wanted me to get lost.

Zelos: Oh come on, you know I was joking!

Lloyd: Right...

...Never heard of that vow before. ?_? Sorry, can't help. Heehee... U

Looking forward to your next chapters!

~Rayestar

I am really love'n this fan fiction! PLEASE UPDATE SOON.

Hilarious as usual.

Heh. This is still a fun read, and I encourage you to get your butt moving and UPDATE!

(and those PS2 thingies are weird...Zelos goes on a date with Raine(Refill)? Weird.)