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mamita chapter 16 . 5/10/2014 Hello, I liked your fic, hopefully upload soon more chapters, Hermione is silly , and I do not like couples with Charlie , really I just like Charlie with Ron hehe, and everyone always takes the side of Harry , and Ron , who ? anda longer worth them Lucius and Ron, my favorite couple of all this series or movie is CharliexRon , although it's a shame there are not many fics of them , Harry is silly, that bad are all with Ron , Harry always , and think what you may think or feel Ron? , that pig is cruel Lucius , Ron is worth more than you think and think , you think Harry this, Harry that, but never see Ron , not even his family , are fools , I here love the relationship of Harry with Ron , because in the end Harry and others have noticed Ron and what it Ron and what he feels, and I'm glad who here has not been heterosexual couples , because I do not like at all , at least not here , I'm sorry you put more POVs of others like it, not just Harry or Ron , but also Charlie and Bill or twins, I like to see what they think of Ron , often pork is Draco , and although I like the relationship of Draco Ron , passed , poor Ron , here Ron is passed , it is true , of all they have done more miserable, I love Ron , but sometimes it happens , Harry passed also , when it is assumed that these two are inseparable, and very close, I love the slash incest Ron and his brothers, fraternal or is also , or couples with Harry provided that Ron is the submissive , not for nothing , but I like it like that, although it is a shame you did not put the whole lemon , except Ginny, I do not like her, I do not like the straight with Ron , and less if Hermione , hehe , very silly at times , the end sought by himself the trouble, but hey , I hope you do more of Ron fics because it's a shame there are not many, still , so thanks and kisses. |
neko1998 chapter 16 . 2/20/2013 SEQUAL! SEQUAL! SEQUAL! O.O' Sorry I got carrried away but either way poor Ron but still he shouldn't have impregnated her in the first place unless he becomes mpreged. Still yippy I can't wait new chapter |
forgetmenotjimmy chapter 16 . 6/18/2011 Wow, what a story! I loved the whole suspense about what Ron's purpose in Voldemort's plan is and his relationship with Draco is very well-written. I also liked how you put in a summary above each chapter just to set the scene quickly, nice touch. Well done! :D |
Epiphany Rising chapter 16 . 7/15/2008 I really enjoyed your story. But I have a question... Do we get those last two chapters or did you decide not to write anymore? I hope to at least get a somewhat happier ending. |
tory chapter 10 . 4/19/2008 it was a great scene :) |
tory chapter 3 . 4/19/2008 wow! I like it. keep going. |
Hikiko chapter 16 . 12/26/2007 I love this fic! It's so hard to find a well-written Draco/Ron fics, since either because Draco would be the submissive one, or there isn't any good plot. I just read your profile and am willing to wait until the next update, whenever that may be. Just don't ever give up on this! x |
Jubalint Ikinz chapter 10 . 9/25/2007 *sparkly eyes* sugoi...!*drool* |
deliciously forbidden chapter 16 . 8/31/2007 really like the lyrics of the song. could you give me the references of it? you sings it and what is the name of the song please? so your story is quite interesting. how you make your characters personality grow is fantastic. i most like how ron sees draco and his feelings. it's really a strong bond. can't wait to read the rest and the end. until then good luck with everything and i hope that your hand is all better and all. |
deliciously forbidden chapter 10 . 8/31/2007 No don't change anything, it's perfect the way it is, howyou describe it...ymmy kinky nearly shower sex. yeah wanted that part from the beginning lol. good work, too bad your chapters are a little short, but your story is great, really. |
JaceDamian23 chapter 16 . 8/5/2007 please come story is interesting.i love it It’s not your fault…I just don’t want any more bad news.” The owl hooted again, a hint of concern in her voice. She flew to his head and picked at his hair. Draco laughed. His owl always cheered him up, it was as if she tried to say: cheer up! Chin up! Everything will be okay. He pulled the owl out of his hair and tenderly set her back upon his shoulder. She hooted into his ear before extending her leg again. Draco sighed. “You’re just not going to give up, are you?” She hooted again, happily. In spite of everything, Draco smiled again. “Fine,” He scolded her softly, a hint of amusement in his eyes. “You’re worse than my mum, you are.” haha Son, The Dark Lord is pleased with your behaviour. Everything has gone according to plan. The bloodtraitor has impregnated Brown. Their baby must be protected at all costs. Draco, I know that this is much to ask, but try to befriend both and keep an eye on the baby. Don’t fail your master. Lucius. gr WHY i wanna no:( OMFG DRACO killed the baby?holy shit. that was a good..BUT SAD part |
JaceDamian23 chapter 11 . 8/5/2007 "Drink it" Draco pulled up one eyebrow, but stayed silence. It was Ron who voiced both their concerns. "I'm not drinking his blood!" "I still can't believe he pinched my nose and forced me to drink that stuff" Ron grumbled while following Draco closely. Draco stayed silent. "I mean...your blood...gross..." "Shut up Weasel...I had to do it too...thank god you're not a bloody mudblood" lmfao. omg love that part hahah "Because unlike you my father has enough money to pay for a bedroom with a double bed for me alone. So unless you want to spend the next three weeks crammed together in a single bed you better shut up and keep walking." *snorts* ohh please draco..he can aford a king bed...heck a 100 of them lol and since they both didn't want Ron to sit with the Slytherins Draco conjured some food which they ate in silence. they both? thats dumb of draco Draco looked contented. When he had stupefied Ron it had just been to shut him up, but now that he had him on the bed, handcuffed to the bedpost, he was feeling good about himself. Now he would be able to sleep. He was still straddling Ron who started to wriggle, coming out of his stupefication, onvoluntarily grinding his hips into Malfoys, who held back a groan. Suddenly that look of lust was back in his eyes again. This looked an awful lot like his fantasy. Here Ron Weasley was. On his bed. Unable to move. When he bent over a little there was a whirl of different emotions in Rons eyes. Need. Lust. Want. Disgust. It was the disgust that turned Draco on the most. With a throaty moan he attacked Rons lips. ohh i loved that part. lol. the disgust turned on draco the most? haha “Goyle probably dragged him to the kitchen for a midnight snack. That stupid gobbler.” lol ohh showering together eh?hot i dont get how ron broke the bond “No. Just take advantage of the fact that we’re no longer connected and get the hell out of my room jerk Or you crucio me. Besides I could have hexed you and performed a healingspell afterwards.” Draco looked at him, seemingly unsurprised, even though he had to admit Ron had thought of something he himself had neglected. “Fine. I’ll use a truthspell. You won’t be able to tell a lie.” “You’re not just gonna take my word for it then” Ron said sarcastically. lol “So...Weasley...how do you feel about me?” “I love you” WOW |
SilverWing129 chapter 16 . 7/31/2007 OMG CLIFFHANGER! PLEASE WRITE MORE! PLEASE PLEASE DOWN ON MY KNEES! |
ForgottenShadow4 chapter 16 . 7/1/2007 WTF! I HATE YOU! YOU STOPPED! however it was amazing! update soon! |
MystikalRedRose chapter 16 . 6/20/2007 update this please... its so good... i love draco.. hes so confused in this story its cute! |