A simple thank you wouldn't be enough to convey my gratitude for you , writersan

Excellent work, Random! One of the things that I adore about Naruto is the quantity and quality of side characters, and how fleshed out each is. As such, I enjoy the Shikamaru/Temari pairing immensely, and I think that this is one of the best stories involving that ship that I have read. Thank you for it!

Ahahaha ik this is years late but this is a great story

The kiss stealer strikes again

That was the cutest thing ever

Temari is pulling a yuno?!

Very cute. You actually managed to make that quite realistic!

More story less authors notes...takes away from the enjoyment :(

well written... I really liked it

I really enjoyed this interpretation of Shikamaru and Temari's relationship. It's the first time that I'd read such a story pre-timeskip. Thanks for portraying one of my favorite Naruto pairings in a realistic way!

I have read tens even hundreds of books and other temashika fanfics but yours is the best and I can compare your writing skill to jk Rowling. PPPPPLEAAAASE write a sequel to this. This is like an unfinished book if you don't please

very good story

LOL make more xD

Soooooo... I read this fanfic a while back and thought I was really good, so I tried to read it again... I didn't like it too much this time. Idk. Am i wrong? I just think that it might've been a little too childish this time. But, I have to say that I loved the ending. I LOVED it. I still like this fanfic but I just don't think it was up to the standards of some of the other fanfics I've read lately. It's still good tho.

I liked it, I read the whole thing, and typically if I don't like it I don't bother even finishing the first chapter, so kudos hope to see more works in the future