God, I just can't bear reading this anymore. As someone who was in an abusive relationship, Kagome deciding to stay (and fuck) the guy who gut punched her hard enough to make her miscarriage is disgusting, and you should be ashamed of yourself for thinking that's okay. Hiei apologizing again and again doesn't change the fact that he PUNCHED HER HARD ENOUGH TO KILL HER BABY.

If anything, you should have at least spent 5 or so chapters with Kagome afraid to go near Hiei and Hiei having to gain her trust again before they get right back to fucking each other. The fact that she was immediately okay with Hiei KILLING HER BABY is disgusting and sends a bad message.

My God, Kagome really is an abuse victim. Apologizing to her abuser even then she was the one abused.*shakes head*

After what Hiei did he doesn't deserve to be with Kagome. You shouldn't condone abusive relationships. :(

Please write more fics!

To soon.

Loved ur story, lad it had a happy ending.

loved it...Hiei/Kagome stories love em

nice, i really liked this story

Aw what a nice story. Thanks for posting

What;'s about the Shikon no Tama? Did Kagome take it back from Inuyasha?

it is so (Sniff) beautiful i think the is the best hiei/kagome i ever read

love it!

Wow! I really, really enjoyed this story! I especially appreciate that you didn't feel the need to pair everyone off - more focus on the main couple, and hey: who says everyone gets together at the same time anyway? This was well-written, and I look forward to reading more of your work!

I love it!

Very,very,good!