P-chan: (remembers why she was frothing at the mouth) Ash, could I ask Pikachu to zap someone? Thanks!
Kishu: (gets zapped by Pikachu)
P-chan: bwahaha! Thanks for letting me borrow Pikachu, Ash!
Ash: (blank stare)

P-chan: (froths at the mouth with fainted-pokemon-swirly-eyes) NO! NO!NOOOOOOO! KISH AND ICHIGO AREN'T MEANT TO BE TOGETHER!
Ash: (randomly appears and blinks) What am I doing here?
P-chan: You're Ash Ketchum! My brother an
d I are huuuuuuuuge fans of yours!
Ash: Umm... thanks?
Pikachu: Pika!
P-chan: (s

Ash: Umm... thanks?

The young girl was pissed. Very pissed. So she summoned Kishu and beat him up. Then she summoned Ichigo and Masaya (Aoyama) and had them confess to each other. And then she sent them back and was happy. The end. w

I KNOW WHAT YOU COULD DO FOR CHAPTER 12 IF YOU EVER UDPDATE...DO A PUDDING TART ONE AND USE PURIN AND TART WITH YOU...AND MAKE IT FUNNY!

That story is SO Kawaii! but it is kind of Kowaii how Pudding tortures Taruto. Wai-Wai! I hope you write more stories! Please write more!

wha

it's over no more reading of tar-tar i want more with him i love your storys i love tar-tar and i was hoping u would post my comment but now... my class love your stories so dose my sis and me. i know u loved wrighting these please wright more like the x mas on like a valintimes one or easter or new years or school based one i don't care but i love your stories and tar-tar n e way *sniff* syonara

pudding

i will always love you tar-tar and these stories i will check every month for more of your stories cause you inspired me to wright a story about (blush madly) me and tar-tar and no one eles in the world knows about that story apart from u and again syonara *sniff* ...

pidding

*cry* tar-tar i love you -ToT-

-o- -ToT-

i loved it until i read and strangles tar-tar to death... - i wuv tar-tar... hay i might start a story about me and tar-tar running away togther and ...(start to think weired thoughts about a romantic tar-tar story and blush madly at the thought of him kissing me) err... keep wrighting

love pudding

tar-tar... kiss... me (smile blush madly) -o-

i have no idea if your reading these but i still love tar-tar and you stories there so funny i went on here and read the xmas one out to my class and they loved it and they say your verry talented and should have you own oficial book! n e way keep on wrighting

love pudding

i... love... TAR-TAR! (start to blush) -o-

yay no violence and i loved it 1 of your best merry xmas happy new year keep wrighting i will check each week for more stories about my tar-tar (start thinking crazy thought about tar-tar then blush madly) n e way oh i don't no when ur b day is but happy birthday

love pudding

tar-tar... (more wired thought about tar-tar then blush loads more) -o-

yay hardly no violence to my taru-taru and that thing with the oranges and ryou LOL me and my sis couldet stop laughting n e way awsome story wuv u taru-taru

love pudding

-o- taru-taru -o- wuv u

ok i will stop reviewing soon because my taru-taru keeps on getting hurt and he's not that small hes the same size as puddind (not me -_-) oh taru-taru i have drawn 100 pics of u now and i have lots of pictures on my computer n e way keep wrighting

love pudding

wuv u taru-taru -o-

funny my sis was upset hardly no kish (who cares not me!) try not to hurt taruto please or i'll hurt u... just kiddin keep wrighting

love pudding

i love u tarb -o-

that was funny cant wait to read the next one and don't kill my taru-taru (glare at a pic of taru-taru) my sis was happy again cause of kish... keep wrighting

love pudding

i love taru-taru -o-

wow not as funny as your last one but still awsome and please stop torchering taruto kill pianist instead or something and please keep wrighting you good at it

love pudding

p.s i still love taruto -o-

hi i still love your storys and my sis loves this one (cause) of kish but i will always leave a review behind so keep wrighting

love pudding

p.s my real name is lynsey and i put pudding as she is like me we both like taruto! -o-