A very beautiful poem, and Lain's POV makes it great.

Aw. *pastes on the big anime eyes* That was so beautiful! Very sweet thoughts from Lain to Alice. I hope you write more poetry like this, you obviously have talent.

xSJ:)

(sniff, sniff) that was beautiful. One flaw though...

Alice was the only one in the series who loved Lain. No one else did, even though they say or thought they did.

great poem, nicely worded, i would like to see more of your work, its really good.

Nice poem! I liked it alot. It was so sweet and kinda sad. Lain is one of my favorite animes. TWO THUMBS UP!

I love your work, please write more.

O... chills. Kinda freaky. More so because it begs the question: are we real? Or are we figments of the imagination, simply dreams? (Unfortunately, we don't get godly power when we realize we don't exist. Blast!)