This, in my opinion, is a great story. I have been looking for some good KibaxTsume stuff and this one is one of the best fanfic's I have read. Great job and keep up the good work, my friend.

i likes it but i think itcould have been longer im working on a fic for vegeta and gok i have maybe 7,000 words on 56 pages and ideas keep comeing you are a great writer very well done jov .

awww i love it can you please make another chapter

I love it and can't find words to express how I feel when I read it...
A really good fic that I will read again and again.
Maybe a sequel?
(sorry but english isn't my first language)

Frenchyaw!

I thought it was cute.

that was actually pretty good. please write more.

n.n Kiba X Tsume FTW! I always saw Toboe as almost like Tsume's younger adopt-a-brother, so I'm glad you agree with me on that. As for Kiba and Tsume getting together, I'm agreed. For one, Tsume is Kiba's beta or second-in-command. Secondly, it's a big fact that among wolves the real second-in-command is typically the alpha's mate. -whistles innocently- ...Think that's a good enough reason for it?

To be honest, if people actually applied _normal_ wolf behavior to the characters in Wolf's Rain, then Kiba X Tsume would be the only thing that would make sense (except for maybe Kiba X Hige, but personality-wise I can't see it). Come to think of it, I think the only reason people think Kiba and Tsume as a couple is weird is because they buy into the strict seme-uke myth... which is about as realistic as a turnip sprouting eyes, arms, legs, and a mouth and begins dancing and singing random songs from Looney Toons.

In any case this review is getting a tad long, so before I bore you I'll cut off and let you get on with your life. To say the least this story is faved and gets full kudos from me.

~Fira, The Mouse of Anon

aha! i'm not the only one who loves this couple! so this means i cna't be the only one who likes a uke tsume!... that aside, beautiful and poetic, loved the ' if i'm hungry for love' line!

"HELL IT TOTALLY SCARED ME". THIS STORY IS FUCKED UP...[falls over chair and starts to suck thumb]

I've always been a Tsume/Kiba fan, from the first time they met the sexual tension was OBVIOUS, it's completely canon! So I was confused when I found that there are really hardly any Tsume/Kiba fics! O_O

Though I do understand, people really like Tsume/Toboe because they love the pure Innocence of Toboe, people are suckers for total Virgins. Something pure and sweet they can exploit -_-

STILL! Tsume/Kiba is such an obvious pairing to me o_O and I myself do rather see Tsume/Toboe as more of a platonic big brother/father-son relationship, I mean usually I'm all for the really young guys with the older ones but... I don't know, something about Toboe... it Almost seems wrong o_o;; *shot*

Anyway so yes, I liked this, especially the only wolves going to paradise theory. Great job, let the Tsume/Kiba Love Rain Down! O

I really enjoyed this little view of the characters. You seemed to speak some of my own thoughts of them, as well.

Very poetic in its own rights. lovely.

*didn't realise Tsume/Kiba was a rare pair, but now some things make sense*

nice fic. I liked the idea that only the wolves can reach paradise, although poor kiba is disillusioned...

very nice. _

I love this story and the pairing is awsome! XD

Thank u for writing it and write more!

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Great story, you write beautiful. I love this couple, thanks for writing this

KAWAII!I WANT MORE!