Sequel please?

This looks to be pretty good

SEQUEL!

Theses song really reflects Raven and the whole Terra thing

GO!

Conflict, terror, hear the noise.

You're on the edge of a nerve-racking force.

But, oh, my god, here's the fight.

Never siege, never riot, must defy.

Well look at me, what do you see?

Another trophy, a living fucking dead beat

Close your eyes take a step with me

You're gone but it's not too late

Exhibiting Abnormality

It's not what you call reality.

But you will always forget

One thing I'd like you to know

I don't give a flying fuck motherfucker

I don't give a flying fuck motherfucker

I don't give a flying

I don't give a flying,

I don't give a flying FUCK

I'll never wait for any interference

When the other people talk all over my shit

But do I speak thee, yes I do

So fuck hypocrisy and fuck you too

INCOMING!

Say one, more word, I double dare you (bring it on)

It's my world, you're in it, it'll take you down in a minute

You can alter your look, diversify your age.

But the truth seems like a bitch slap in your face.

Well look at me, what do you see?

Another trophy, a living fucking dead beat

Close your eyes, take a step with me

You're gone but it's not not too late

Exhibiting Abnormality

Careful what you call reality

But you will always want

You want the day that you shall die.

I don't give a flying fuck motherfucker

I don't give a flying fuck motherfucker

I don't give a flying

I don't give a flying

I don't give a flying FUCK

INCOMING!

[Chorus]

INCOMING!

I really liked the story...was the last part leading to a sequel? Anywho...it was very well written.

Hm... was your story at all inspired by the movie Batman Begins? *shifty eyes*

Good but the Titans live in Jump City not Gotham.

oh... its over. wah. Oh but it was really good! I'm glad you didn't make Raven love someone too, as and guy and girl, yay! Great ending! I love endings that aren't "and they all lived happily ever after". It was awesome, and I'm sad it's ended! see ya!

YEAH! WHOO HOO! I loved it! whoo! yeah. you go! hee

Wow...

I'm impressed by your writing and idea for this story. Congrads to you and your friend that wrote this. Oh strippers huh? I'll email you my address P And you just proved to all those romance obsessed people that a good story can exist without romance ;D

You know your characters, and you present them to your audience in a way that captivates the reader but doesn't loose sight of the characters' personalities. Perfect, I LOVE IT! My reward to you is...sexy men covered in melted chocolate! I would have kept them for myself...but you deserve them more than I do!

;)

Nice way to end the story. The possibility of her coming back on the horizon... Please make a sequel where Terra does come back and tries to take over! If not, just keep writing Teen Titan stories!

Nice. I don't really get the hole in body business, but meh. Terra drowning in memories good concept and imagery. Nice fluffy ending (family fluff, lol). Do I smell a sequel...?

Absolutely awesome story! I love it so much! I had a great time reading this. Raven is such a complex and spectacular character, but very enjoyable to read about. You're a great writer, so don't ever stop! I'll be looking out for more great fics from you in the future.

Until then,

Kerrie AKA Scorpioserpent

Ah, nice end and a nice lead up to a sequal. Good job. I enjoyed the story, even if I think Terra was off [but you still played her off well]. Good story, I'm glad you finally 'completed' it [I see a sequal, I'm almost certain of it.]