Keep writing I would like to read more into this story. So far your story has an excellent start ;)

thats a good one-shot

Very sad, but I really liked

This was amazing, please keep writing great things like this!

So intimate!

TwiTragic13

xox

AH

i loved it

great job

10/10 :)

This is very sweet. One problem I have is that there are so many unanswered questions. Like, when and how did Hippolyta die?You may consider making another one-shot as a companion "On Death and Dying" to explain what happened and what Diana does next. This is a GOOD STORY on it's own but it would be MUCH BETTER with a little explanation.

:)

It's okay, missing a few things... But it's ok.

you have a really great 1 chapter story. in fact its the best ive seen in a while. sometimes 1 chapter stories say more and here you definitely say a lot. good insight on the charachters. a little off charachter but whos to say that what we see on tv and read in the comics is all that they are? keep up the good work.

That was awesome! Made my time spent worthwhile.

Wow. Such a sweet and touching story. I loved it.

It's a pretty good story but when did Hippolyta die?

The story idea was good. I'm a sucker for the whole BMWW idea. The story though seemed like it was in the middle of a larger idea. There were a lot of unanswered questions like "where were they" or "why were they both there at the same time" that never got answered. The ending also did have the same type of conclusion a one-shot should have. It seemed like there was still more of a story to tell but you just stopped. That said, the part that you did write was really well done. I liked how you kept the character's true to their personality but still managed to have them have an honest conversation.

Good fic. Write more soon.