WHAT?! No! This can't be happening! This can't be the end of this story! :'((( I hope that you're going to fix this emotional mess in the sequel! I really do!

But nevertheless, I want to compliment you on this amazing piece of writing. This is one of the most intense stories I've ever read, and one of the best, too. Like really.
I totally love how you portrayed Kim's and Ron's characters. Your take on their friendship and later their romantical involvement was superb. The missions you described were exciting and adventurous. It was like watching one big episode of KP. And the humour! It was hilarious at some points!
I found it really fascinating how you developed both their characters. I've never realised how much of a temper Kim has. And how much Ron has to suffer from this sometimes.
Nevertheless, I dont really understand why you blew up the entire progress Kim made and have her lose it over a stupid misunderstanding. It felt like being back to square one. That kind of disappointed me.

But all in all, I'm a HUGE fan of your writing and I really appreciate your work! I'm definitely going to read the sequel, like right now! ;)
Lots of love from Germany.

I think this is the first time I've ever seen Rufus as selfish

This is a good story, but Ron would never stand in the way of Kim's happiness. He has always put her happiness above his own. He even encouraged Kim to ask Josh Mankey to the spirit dance.

good so good. darkness my friend, I love hate angst and anger. perfect ending to a rather forced situation.

i love this drakken and base part. hilarious af XD lmfao

why do you have keep using together? it's like sticking balls to someone's ass and waiting for anal to happen on it's own. they have no choice. there is not other option here, there has been one. XD this was supposed to be funny.

i mean, pushing memories, feelings, visions that's aren't even your own. that's the biggest breach of privacy.

Ron in this story is one sick, weak, pathetic, selfish and coward SOB. just say it if you want to and stop punishing everyone around. too much closeness often leads toxicity. mind you, story is well written. it's just the plot is too forced. joined hands? how funny it would be if their butts were joined XD lmao

Awww

Nice teamwork.

I know it's not really fair, since most writers in this fandom are young, but it's always a breath of fresh air to find a story that's pretty well edited and interesting!

Hello again, Ayotte!
I don't know if you still read the reviews, but I really hope you read mine.

I wanted to let you know that I love your Equal Romance so much that I have actually created an ebook pdf version of it for myself, so that I can re-read it anytime I want to without needing internet access, and so I can have a backup of it just in case something ever happens and your story becomes deleted from the internet.

I have been recommending all my friends to read Equal Romance, and they all loved it.

I'm still sad that this story is unfinished, and it's sad that we will never know how the story ends when you have everything planned and know how the story would go.

Listen, Ayotte. I know it's been 7 years, and you have most likely moved on from writting entierly. But I still haven't lost hope. Deep in heart, I'm still hoping that one day you will one day return to this story and complete this epic saga, and finish your trilogy.

I want you to know that if you ever come back to this story and continue it, I will be so happy, and I will read it, and I will tell my friends about it.

Your story is the best fan fiction I have ever read, and I will be re-reading it many times.
And if you ever update the story, I will read the next chapter as soon as you do.

Please know that you still have fans who would be so happy if this story continued.

But even if you don't continue it, it's still been an amazing story, and I'm so happy you wrote it.

Still hoping for updates thought. Still hoping...

I really got hooked on this. I could not get myself to stop reading. I kept telling myself 'one more chapter, then I'll sleep.' Yeah... didn't happen. Read the whole thing in one night. I ended up staying awake until around 5. Now I'm ready for round two! Hope I can get myself to stop this time, I have to be up at 7 tomorrow...

I figured out why it seems so strange to me. Are you from Britain?

Oh my god! What is wrong with Kim! Ugh! I'm frustrated! Amazing story can't wait to read the next installment