Why? Just why?

Very well written,hate stories when one of them dies, crying my eyes out at the moment,must be good writing to do that, still thought he was gonna wake right to the end

That is a really good story.
I haven't cried in a long time and this story made me do that. It was so sad because you went deep and well it's just a really deep sad story

Ph my goodness! I actually cried whilst reading this, it's amazing!

you are so talented! I can't tell you how much I cried reading this!

Wah, as much as I love your stories, please stop killing characters...I'm running out of tissues.

Seriously though, your stories are wonderfully written.

What a great Story... I have to fight back my tears...

Oh my...this is so sad. I ended up crying at the end. The boys have been through rough times, but to lose their father is probably the baddest thing that could happen to them.

Ok theres a puddle all around me...So many death fics! You'd think I'd learnt my lesson but oh no, lol, seriously though, been trying hard not to cry but aww! Such sad fics. Gah evil gordy with the little shit comment. Loved it!

Ya might consider posting a hanky alert at the beginning just to be fair...at least my contacts aren't dry anymore...

ow man... i never thought that some one would ever may a dead fic about jeff... please update soon... *hold Virgil in her arms and hug him*

Great story but very, very sad. I felt so sorry for the Tracy boys reading this. Now they've lost both parents and are on the own.

Don't really need the background story but you might consider doing a sequel to show how the boys are coping - or not coping - with the death of there father.

Claudette's review made me wanna write a story about the brat dying. HA. but i dont write good angst fics.

heart wrenching, it was. Though at the end, I doubt it's literally a plug to be pulled when it comes to ending life support, it's more of a saying than a procedure, but that's a minor detail. I'm not even sure myself, so don't quote me on that.

That was so sad! Beautiful story.

Phoenix Sparrow

"Hope you like"! You hope we like it when you kill Jeff Tracy! Are you mad?

Well-written, heart rending, yes, but like it?

Background? What's the point - we know the ending - don't we?

Tell you what - I'll read the rest if you pull the rabbit out of the hat & bring him back. How about that hmm? Is it a deal?

Why does everyone around here chose to kill everybody other than The Brat? Am I the only one in the world who hates him?