aw, wonderful one shot, I love how you describe lettie and ben
I think you got their characters very well :)

I love this! It's so sweet. I like the way you described Sullivan's reaction to Lettie's confession: "She knew him well enough by then, the calmer Ben was on the outside, the more confused he was on the inside." Wonderful.

This was so cute!You actually did a great job at portraying their personalities.:)

Aww... very sweet, it's nice to see someone writingabout Lettie and Ben for once to, it's enough of a rarity to find a Michael and Martha story. Funny you should call his home Camelot too since obviously the sirename Pendragon was derived from the same ledgend.

Aw! Is this like... the ONLY Lettie/Ben fic out there?

bb xx K.A.

I enjoyed it, I like how you gave them both such personalities when they're not mentioned that much in the book.

Cute! -

Greatest line ever:

"One minute I was walking clockwise around the gorse bush with a bunch of Hemlock in my hand, and the next thing I know, I was in Kingsbury."

Hehehe. That was great.

It's just right ;) wonderful story :D

Wow, that was cute _. I love it! Congrats on being one of... no the only Lettie/ben fic out there. It was quite good.

Cute beyond words.

You really understand the characters.

I love this! I cannot find anything wrong with this story, or your writing style, or whatever. . .

But HOW could you stop updating your other stories! You haven't been writing for over a year! What a pity. I'm sure other readers would love to see more of your writing. Please!

Very sweet! I love it! _

Oh, that was sweet. Although, have you read the Immortals Quartet by Tamora Pierce? I don't remember mention of Ben's past in the book and his is remarkably like one of Pierce's characters...

Oh, this is so sweet! I've always wondered about Lettie and Ben. I like how you made Lettie such a developed character, even though we know hardly nothing from the book. She seems real! Keep up the good work!

I'm so sorry I didn't read this before now! Let me get my thoughts together before I get down to really reviewing though. (All I can think is, "Aw!" *laughs*)

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Okay. Now, about the part of this that isn't adorably fluffy... Great, original pairing story! I liked it a lot. Ben and Lettie's interactions were very "real." Also, Lettie's thoughts were fun to read. You made her very strong-minded like Sophie but in her own, unique younger way.

Do you have any other new DWJ stories hidden up your sleeve? More L/B perhaps? _-

Greab job. _

~ Emily