I love it, please update soon. You left at a cliffhanger please update!

Me again. Glad that you updated. pretty good. Do you know if they still show Yu Yu Hakasho anymore on Cartoon Network. I haven't seen it in a while and I was wondering. Hope you update soon.

Awesome, you updated!

Ideas: Hmm... Maybe this girl can be some sort of half-breed or something, y'know, like Inuyasha. I think that she should've been atacked by a demon, but maybe it should be a familar demon, like, maybe Karasu or Rando. Demons who were 'dead'. Necromancy is always pretty fun to write.

As for her kinda downcast demeanor, maybe she could've been abandoned at birth by her dad when he found out that she was a demon. Maybe her mom was a Makai prostitute...

Well, I hope my suggestions helped you any. You're story's awesome, so don't be discouaged! Please, take your time with the next chapter and make an awesome piece of work!

~Kai

Still pretty great! By the way, this is The Wandering Soul. Changed my name, ne? Also, yes, the social problem is original. You shouldn't have any pairings, unless Sadako ends with Hiei. Just like that, 2 people who hate eachother end up loving eachother! Heh heh heh...update soon! _

Thanks for putting my review up.

I think the story is funny. Maybe the girl could at one time be crying after Hiei yells at her and run into the garden, the he comes outside and sees her crying and all of a sudden fells sorry for her. something along those lines.

Hey jessica this story is really good but here is some good advice when you wanna write a story, add detail , detail is what'll get you the reviews there are also alot of helpful friends you'll meet when there making comments bye now

Cool! Black! Black is my favorite color, too. Anyhoo, great story so far! The social problem thing is so original!

this is good! please continue! _

Please more moer plese love it

::shifty eyes:: I sense a Mary-Sue approaching...

My inner monologue is screaming at the top of its lungs, "Oh, dear Inari-sama, not ANOTHER one!"

Good story. Update soon. I read the reviews you have and I don't understand why Tina doesn't usual like Yu Yu Hakasho. I like it.

Hm, not bad! I hope to read more soon. That comment about friends may intrigue Hiei. Later!

Sending mischief your way!

Snowfire the Kitsune

COOL! Cant wait for next chappie!

You know I don't usually like YuYuHakusho that much but that was a very good story! I am very suprised Jess keep it up!

Inusgal