Noooo! That jerk doesn't deserve to die with a smirk on his face! No!

Awesome Kingdom Hearts story!

YAY HAPPY ENDING! i LOVE IT!] heh i realy like how you did the first half of the story in kairi's point of view and then the next half in sora's i thought it was really creative, you did a mighty fine job]

hah i LOVED the ending, son of a bitch got what he had coming to him] yay JUSTICE PREVAILS!] heh really really nice story by the way, i really like it

damn...

her life sucks...

i knew something like that was gonna happen but u know i was just hoping for some good luck...

I'll be looking for some other stories of yours soon enough

Simply amazing story, took me 2 hours to start and finish it without stopping (Yes, I'm a very fast reader)

I tried to find the novel on Fictionpress, apparently there's no such user by the name of Brookeispwnful :( I tried to find it by searching the name...theres a hell of a lot of stories with "Shattered Dreams" as the title, like, two pages XD

Anyways, I loved it and I will continue reading your other stories.

~Raineh~

cool story

AW that was so good! I'm happy that Sora and Kairi are okay :)

Absolutly fantastic! I really liked when it was Sora's point of view and he had all those dirty thoughts, lol. I never expected the whole twin thing with Riku and Ryou. All the fluff with Kairi and Sora was so cute, especially when they slept in the same bed. Can't wait till I find someone as perfect as Sora. Great job! SAd it's over though :(

Great story I absolutely loved it! Loved how you brought Riku into this story better :D and that no one ended up dying at the end. I was so scared that Sora was gunna die, then Kairi, and then I thought Ryou had shot himself, but then, Riku... Yay! And then... I was afraid Riku was gunna be dead, but I'm glad it all turned out okay!

I love how you added Selphie and Tidus into the story, amused me much :D

Keep up the good work!

zesty

o-m-g is all i can say rite now

this is SUCH a great story!

plz update with the sequels soon! XD

again with ryou why not kill him with a m134 minigun then?

murder... a bad thing to do,i hope ryou gets killed by michael myers and goes to hell

ok dont get offended i love ur story but it would be better if u cut all the consecuence crap but other than that it was beautiful

I know you finished this story a while ago, but excellent story! I give it a perfect 10/10. You have an amazing talent. You writing is great and you have a wonderful imagination. I lso like the songs you included in the story as well. You have a really good taste in music.