Did u kill Alicia Spinnet for real

Oh my goodness this was AMAZING. Fred and George are so cute omgomgomg *squeal*
This was super super good I wish it never ended :D
Sucks that in the real book Fred and George had to die though ::(
OH well, at least this has a happy ending!
ANway, I read this all today and IT WAS SUPERB! Keep writing!

You have no idea how close to tears i am at this chapter. They are so meant to be with eachother and they are both so sad. Oh my goodness, this is brilliantly written well done!

cry cry 3

love that story so much it's really good

I loved this story before but now I feel the need to tell you that: THIS CHAPTER WAS AMAING! It is probably the cutest, most romantic, cliche-without-being-overbearing scene I have read in ages. You're an awesome writer, which you've probably been told loads of times but yeah, can never get too many compliments right? Anyways, just thought I'd say.. write that before I headed off to bed, and I shall continue reading this story before I leave for school tomorrow morning :)

I love the line that Fred told Peeves to do to Umbridge!

“Give her hell from us Peeves.”

J.K. Rowling really knows what to write! Your story is really in depth; I really like it, especially this chapter!

not the brightest crayon in the marker box

Sque! That is one of the best George/Alicia fanfictions I have ever read! I love when they get married, its so sweet! Plus, your story has all of my favorite ships! Go You! SQUE!

THIS STORY IS GREAT!

WOOT. finally G & A are together!

i dont remember george falling from the broom in the ootp... did you add that to get G/A going?

i like this story already! its really good

again entirely unrealistic, i'm sorry i keep bashing your story and you probably aren't even reading these reviews anymore, but every single person in this story is now out of character

moody would never joke around with fred and george like that...george and alicia would not have sexmolly would never act like that at all, i know she got mad over bill and fleur in the real books but still she is entirely out of character, and what happened to dumbledore tonks kingsly shaklebot or whatever and all the other ppl who are in the order...

...what happened to lucius? just kinda disappeared...and there is now way george could have stunned what was it like 8 death eaters...in the real books harry never even did that, just just stunned a couple and ran

sorry, i really like this story but this chapter was terrible, do you really think that malfoy would fall for that? you've got to be kidding me, oh yeah i have flaming red hair and i'ma weasly why dont i just hand a known death eater the very thing that he is willing to kill for since i'm just looking for my keys anyhow? wtf? malfoy would have killed alicia and made george show him the orb, but he would have restrained george somehow, they were just walking along like they were best friends, " well we can't apparate b/c i dno even know what you said but malfoy never would have agreed with george...and why would the order give the twins such and important assignment, and why would they let alicia and angelina in on it? they never let harry in on it why would that let those two in just because they were going out with the twins? and are they still in thier nightgowns? it's not like they didn't have time to change, george did...

i really like the story thus far, but this chapter was just entirely unrealistic and tried to make george look like like hero saving the scantily clad girl of his dreams by charming a serial killer into following him up a mountain...give me a break