I always wondered how Gohan would have ended up with Goku as his only caregiver? I always thought that Chi-Chi is kind of abusive with her yelling and indoctrination on her kid. And manipulating Goku into doing things.

This was great i hope you do some kind of a sequel to this like when he find out about goku coming back for one day or after he comes back to like after Buu

I think this story is awesome. I always love it when people point out the side of Goku that isn't so childlike or "innocent".

I loved this!

Sympa.

I really enjoyed this. It's nice to read something where Gohan is not mad at his father or psychological twisted by all the death and personally I could never believe that Gohan really stopped training in those 7 years after all the stuff he went through as a child. Even though they hope the planet is save after Cell, he's officially the new protector of earth, not to train means he'll let his dad down and earth. Never understood that logic.
Also if you watch DB Goku has quite some smart ideas, he's just socially wired, which makes sense growing up alone. It's sad that in some fan fictions Goku comes over as a total idiot.
Thanks for this one shot.

Wow...this is pretty deep. I like the idea that Goku's more complex than he seems and ther's a deeper level of his realationship with his son and friends than we really see.

There are several things that I never thought that way, for example, I thought Gohan shared a bond with Picolo bigger than his father, or traumatic childhood that Gohan had to live. maybe there are so many hidden things between Goku and Gohan, we just stayed with the first impression :O

I love it! excellent job! very good fic :)

I love it

It nice to finaly read a story that not a Goku bashing and a good father-son bond

Hope you write more stories like this

I dont understand flames. They dont serve a purpose. Anyway, I dont want to rant, I really liked this story. I wasn't sure if I was going to like it because it was angsty. Anyway, good story, good detail. Perfect.

-Mia

O.O

goku...currsing?...

*blink* O.O *blink*

LOVE IT!

goku with a bad side and it has my adorable gohan-chan in it and chi-chi bashing! perfec combination! you my friend are genius! you should right more on goku and gohan-chan *wipes drool of face* gohan-chan...

teehee on't hep it he's just the bestest character in the whole manga, ofcourse faallowed closely by the cutie goten!

is it justme or do chi-chi and goku just give out the best kids!the cutest kids at that!.~

LOVE GOHAN-CHAN AND GOTEN-CHAN!

goku's on oay character so i really couldn't care much about him(although that part were you said he cusses caught me off gard of curse when my gohan cusses it olny makes him even more irisitable!)and chi-chi don't even get me started god i hate her! so annoying!

anyway write more please love your writing!

keep up yhe good work!

This was very well written. While reading, i felt angry and sad. Lonely even. It was so well described that i actually felt like i was Gohan... do you get what i'm saying? It's confusing.

I liked this fic -

i really like this, and in the first half u sounded more angry at chichi but hey it was still a great theory story!

Sincerly,

CoLLiSiOn

That's a really good out look on the way Gohan sees Goku... I know he'll be back too.

wow, great fic Kinoha. The way you desribed Gohan's thoughts and feelings was just...perfect. I could imagine Gohan thinking all of those things. It was just totally in character. I really enjoyed it. I felt angry and i also felt like crying. Maybe its because i feel Goku isn't resepcted enough but you have shown how important and amazing Goku truly is.

Very inspiring. Well done Kinoha...i loved it. You have to write more. Maybe you should do one on Goku's thoughts. Best wishes_

Gosha