So, it's been quite a while since you've updated and it's unlikely that you'll finish the story but I'll review anyways.

The story is well written, no complaints there, but the plot has been bugging me.

I'm sorry but considering that the guardians are now cops, why aren't they attempting to arrest Seymore? I'm sure they have more then enough evidence to at least file the charges against him. Kidnapping, brainwashing, drugging, rape, domestic violence, and now attempted murder with a witnesses (Issaru witnessing Seymore being the last person with Yuna). Not to mention DNA evidence found on Rikku for the rape and blood samples for the drugging.

Maybe a little explanation on how he can get away with these crimes, or how the police are helpless in bringing him to justice. Maybe some superior who's obviously in Seymore's pocket that prevents them from doing their job, just something that can explain their apparent ineptitude when it comes to legal system.

man you really got me hooked with this story, but are you still going to update this? i mean its been three years and i'm starting to lose hope if you're still going to update this story, but seeing as you've recently updated one of your stories i hope you update this too.

please tell me you're still there?and you'd update this beautiful story soon? please update! i'm dying here!please!

this was so...

FREAKING AWESOME!

cheese i always tought that i would hate this AU stories but that is simply great WOW...

a real shame that it ends just now.

you are a freaking genius.

So cool! I know you haven't updated in a while, and your profile says you had a baby, but could you PLEASE finish this someday?

hey, i read this a while ago and wanted to yell at you for like leaving a cliff-hanger and then forgeting about us readers! it's really good! one of the few halfway decent aurikku fics out there. please update. *pout*

yum...auron/rikku nookie.

*slaps self*

aHEM. very nicely written.

Tjis Fanfiction is absolutly fantastic! You HAVE to finish it! I need to see Seymour get his!

ohh...please update! i cant wait to read ur next chapter!..oh please have a happy-ish ending..if anything...thanks

ohh...yay...she remembers...but will the story end happily?

ah...that was a good chappie...

how mean r u ur not mean ur evil...writing evil things...well y is ur life full of chaos? mine isnt ...at the moment..well i hope the chaos stops and u start writing...

eeww...my dog just farted...-gags...i think im gunna puk...

oh please let this story have a happy ending...i dont like evil endings...i've already had to many of my own...

oh no...poor rikku...when does the story get happy?