With GMO's in our food. Chemicals in our water to dumb us down and spraying of our skies,the oceans not behaving right so weather is going weird directions warming the earth up they'd want out fast!

Not to mention Monsanto's GMO food that's bad for you and chemicals in all our food/water slowly dumbing us down and mercury light bulbs that have poison if they are break.

Never mind you are a Liberal so you probably like more and more government control over our lives and having a thought police.

Glad to have located this story. Could not stop reading this terrific and it really was remarkable.

I’m glad to have picked this story. I thought it was incredible and couldn’t stop reading it cause it was very fantastic.

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Good story, really good, but you forget one thing. Marty has faced FIVE version of Biff Tannen, an ancester and a decendant. Don't forget Griff Tannen. The five versions are: 1: orginal 1985-version, (from the start of the first film), 2: improved 1985-version,(after he changed history in the first film), 3: 1985A-version, (from the middle of the seccond movie), 4: 1955-version. 5: 2015-version. That is the correct way, I think you forgot to count the original one in.

Loved it! good job!

Here I fixed the ending for you as it was missing some very obvious details.

New version below.

"Hi Dr. Brown," Linda called, hanging up the phone. "Who's your friend?"

Doc and Clara exchanged a loving glance. "This is Clara Clayton," Doc introduced Clara. With a very subtle wink at Marty, he added, "My fiancee."

YOU'RE WHAT!? Shouted Linda not sure if her ears were deceiving her: "And why are you all dressed in costumes?" she finished. George then asked Marty while pointing at his costume. "You and Jennifer went to the lake dressed like THAT? Doc suddenly realized he needed to come up with a believable story as to how he came to Clara and why they are all dressed in 1880s clothes." (End of Chapter)

Too bad in you're story Doc won't come back in a time train and Marty asks "Where are you going? Back To The Future? Doc: Nope! Already been there!" and Jennifer has that fired paper in her pocket which the words YOU'RE FIRED vanishes but the futuristic paper remains which the presence of said paper should alter history.

So what do you think of the modified ending to make it more complete? Also you forgot the scene where Marty woke up and saw the house looked all different then almost fainted wondering why Dave wore a suit. I don't know about you but I found the ending to the third film to be absolutely hilarious and couldn't stop laughing.

I guess now it would be either Bufford Ravine or Tannen Ravine

"Can do, Emmett," Clara said. "How are you back there?"

Doc tooted the whistle in response. "I'd kind of like to take the train back with us!" he laughed."

I enjoyed your little hint there.

If you want novel length BTTF fanfics then visit this site I found back in the late 90s that has been updated since. bttf/ I hope the link shows if not then it's called Kristensheley dot com and view her Back To The Future site.

She has a whole series with 20 plus fics such as one where they go to the middle ages and another where they get stuck on the RMS Titanic plus many short stories.

There is one in particular where Marty doesn't make it back home and is stuck in 1885.

8:19 A. M.

Doc and Marty took a quick moment to relax in the train cab. The hijack had gone off without a hitch. The locomotive was in their possession, the passengers and engineers left safely behind. It was time to head back to the future. But as they drove the locomotive up to the DeLorean, they saw a horrific sight.

Buford Tannen and his gang were with Clara.

Oh No! Hope Buford doesn't see the flux capacitor and try to operate the machine!

fell in love with this story! i wish this got one more chapter though!

Idk why but I laughed at the end xP awesome story! I wish they had made an alternate ending type thing that was like this (:

i finally read tis after such a long time... teehee... it was good. you should do a fic between the brown and mcfly family. we hardly see marty's siblings at all in the movie...

You gotta continue this fic! I love the DocCLara fluff there aren't enough fics that I can find about this pairing! PLease I am begging and pleading here continue this fic! (*starts to suffocate*)

Paramedic: go on now nothing to see (or in this case read) here!