aahh i think you should finish its like 1230 in the morning and there is no ending...ug!

last update was in 04 and it's like 08 come on! finish this thing... bye now...

this is getting good you got merl down i think bye now...

this is interesting bye now...

Gah!

~twitch~

please tell me you haven't just abandoned this story...

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:O For some reason chapter 2 seems to have been replaced with the new!chapter one! Tragic. Chapter 3 looks to be alright, I'm just disappointed I'll have to skip the chapter!

hello. I check this story everytime I get into an anime. can't believe it's been this long, and i'm still waiting.

I love your story, which is the reason I keep coming back, lol.

I'm not going to threaten you with dead puppies if you don't finish. but i just thought that maybe if you think that people still care about this story, you might consider taking it on again.

... ... ...I give up.

You haven't updated in almost two years now! You're cruel. You abandoned a story for months, then decide to give all your dedicated fans a fabricated string of hope, telling us you'll re-invent the story, giving us a beginning chapter... then you just... sort of abandon the string and leave us hanging... AGAIN! If you're too busy to write it, let me know... though it would have been nice if you'd at least finish the original version. You're an amazing writer, you know it, everyone that has read anything of yours knows it, your plot is excellent, characters are real, emotions are real... don't leave it like this, wasted before reaching it's very high potential.

PLEASE post the next chapter. I've been waiting close to a month now and check everyday to see if you've posted. It's a wonderful story. I love the way you've written it and it isn't so black and white as, "Van falls in love with hitomi , the end."

Well that sucks. I stayed up until five in the morning so excited to read and find out hwo this fic ends... except it's not done. Also upsetting that this hasn't been updated in a year. But enough of my disappointment; you're writing is spectacular, I loved that the chapters were so lengthy, and characterization and character development? Five stars.

It's really good story!One of the best I read here. like the plot and the characters! I hope you update it some day:)Pretty please!

HEY a fellow Canadian! don't know if you'll get this, if you're even checking anymore but I love this story and hope to see it finished one day, I haven't read it in a while so I think I'll do just that. Good luck doing whatever you're doing.

Shy

I really do hope you update soon. I really love this fic and wish you to finish what you've started. It's so beautiful, both the writing and the plot. Keep up the amazing work!

Hello Tea,

Thank you very much for leaving your comment with me! I'm so glad that you found my fanfiction again. It certainly has been years since it's peak time... most unfortunately, I have been having trouble rewritiing it, because of college/uni applications and the such. Hard to believe I started this bloody thing before high school! lol _.

Thank you for bringing up Chapter 5: Session Tapes. I had NO idea it was messing up like that. A few months ago it had been just fine, but in case a new formatting system or something killed my chapter, I re-uploaded it. If there's still anything wrong with it, please let me know. Thanks though for telling me about it! It is an important chapter *nod* _.

And another reviewer that was fluent in tarot cards mentioned the same to me, so yes, I am aware about how incredibly fictional that one chapter is, XD XD! I will put up a mention on there later that it's nothing like real tarot card readings. I happen to know nothing about that, so if anything is -drastically- out of the loop, please let me know! _;;

Thanks so much for your comments and help :)!

I think I remember coming across this story a long time ago- maybe 2 years ago, but could never remember where I read it until I came across the summary of this story in someone's favorites- so here I am, reading it and realizing that this was the story I had been searching for. It's as good as I remember it to be and the beginning is very intriguing. I'm loving it so far. :)

I do, however, have a question- in this chapter (5) that's called Session Tapes...is there more to the chapter than just the initial "Play" and "Stop"? Because that's all that's showing up...about 3 sentences. I'm not sure if you intended it that way or if the site is somehow chopping it off. I hope I'm not going to miss anything crucial before moving on to the next chapter.

And finally, I just want to make a quick note about the cards- it's spelled as Tarot and not Taro. Additionally, the card names you mentioned don't really exist in the decks. ;; I know it's not a huge deal and as long as you get the cards to play to your storyline, it's all that matters. I'm just personally a Tarot reader, so I notice these things. :p Anyhow...I'm going to stop my rambling and continue reading now!

This story is great! I hope you finish it soon. I can't wait to find out what will happen. I'm in complete and utter suspense!