Wow...Just Wow...

I loved this. Interesting how your Revan had issues with sleeping and took stims and was on all sorts of substances to help either not sleep or to try and escape the truth of her of her past.

"This was what the Jedi Council called mercy."
I love that line. I love how you made Revan reluctant to join the order, too.

I've loved this fic for forever, but somehow forgot to fave (review from artistshipper is mine).

I love how you merge guilt from so many directions to make this confused Carth holding it together for Kashele's sake.

Too many fics gloss over how what was done to Revan is essentially mind-rape. You addressed it with great sensitivity - I never thought it would be possible to pack in so much accusation with so little vitriol.

A great story. Very good.

That was just amazing.

Oh wow. Wow thats powerful. great writing

I adore your Kashele. She makes me ache for her- the ending was a perfect coda.

AH, Revan is channeling River Tam!

Okay, jokes aside, this is a fantastic fic. I think a light side Revan would totally react this way when (s)he realized what she was... poor girl

Rakeesh,

I really liked this. Your character development was outstanding and it was refreshing in the fact that it took the story to a different place and a new level for me.

I wish there was more.

Leonnie

I thought this was superb - brilliantly written, powerful and genuinely moving. I think it was probably the best depiction I've seen of Revan's internal conflicts, and thoroughly convincing. Loved it.

Sweet mother of crap, that was a great little fic. I mean, I can't stand Carth OR female Revan stories, and I really enjoyed it. Original, well-written, and just plain good. Nice job!

I would have reviewed this yesterday, but it seems crashed out on us. Anyway. This is one of the most original ideas I have ever read. It's dark, deep, and just a little bit scary in some ways. I absolutely loved it, because it showed Revan finally just breaking down under the weight of it all, unlike the game, and many other fics out there. It seems more human somehow. Great job!

Bravo. This is a moving, beautifully written piece and I applaud you for capturing the struggle of identity that the game seemed to pass over rather lightly. Excellent work!

That was brilliant, and I do mean it. I usually get tired of the whole Revan-with-nightmares - it's a bit overdone. But here you don't let it get fluffy or glamourous. Kash's slip into madness seems to be the type that'll do more lasting damage than the average wake-up-screaming-after-nightmares. The emotions are conveyed amazingly well, and both Carth and Kash truly seem alive and human - something that's not easily done with only a short story.