| Reviews for Crumbling Pedestal |
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   YaoiHellian chapter 41 . 7/23 I'm not sure why I was so sceptical about reading this but I'm so glad I did. I love the take on the founders and the reasonable problems they faced and reacted to. I really liked the passage of time here too. Nothing really felt drawn out or overly extended even during the back in time portions. Overall, I really enjoyed reading your work and the ending was very satisfying and I thank you for sharing. |
| HoneyBear84 chapter 43 . 7/11 Loved it |
| Eluvia Umbra chapter 43 . 6/19 Great story, I loved it~! |
| Serpent91 chapter 43 . 4/19 Well written indeed! |
| vampdreams chapter 43 . 2/25 I have loved this ride so thoroughly I have seen the premise of Harry returning after a sojourn during the Founders' Era, but this was done beautifully When I first read Alternate 01, I thought why would you meddle with a perfect thing; but then on reading that everyone becomes aware of Heru's journey, well, genius I have loved your plot, your characters, your words Brilliant work Thanks for sharing! |
| seldombites chapter 43 . 2/22 I love this story, though I prefer the original ending over the alternates. |
| halleberry1995 chapter 43 . 9/22/2019 BRILLIANT |
| ripper34 chapter 43 . 4/28/2019 Good story |
| StoneTheLoner chapter 43 . 4/13/2019 I'm kinda left wishing you'd done something really crazy for the alt endings. Like Harry really choosing Voldemorts side and attacking Dumbledore and allies after healing the dark lord to full power. |
| StoneTheLoner chapter 14 . 4/13/2019 He helped create the wards of Hogwarts and the village next to it but somehow dealing with a little tattoo the dark lord back in his heyday banged out fairly often knocked him on his ss. Yeah, I totally believe that. It's not like you had anything to gain by giving... Snape an opportunity to see Harry be vulnerable... and take of him... Shame on you lowering the quality of your fanfic for a result you could've gotten without introducing continuity mistakes. |
| StoneTheLoner chapter 13 . 4/13/2019 This chapter sucks |
| StoneTheLoner chapter 12 . 4/13/2019 That's pretty funny. I hope he weirds out some more people. |
| StoneTheLoner chapter 10 . 4/13/2019 You brushed past it but it's a genuinely good question. Should he obliviate her? I guess the way he walked out is telling of what he chose to do in the end but that doesn't explain his reasoning at all. He's obliviated and otherwise mindfcked people(pitchfork carrying muggles) before, no question about it. So why the fck didn't he strangle the rumors of his name in the crib while he could still easily do so? Hell, why didn't he just lie about his name in the first place? |
| StoneTheLoner chapter 3 . 4/13/2019 That's a little heavy to start with. And not just heavy but also cringy somehow even though that doesn't make sense. I pulled back from the idea of him being so open about so many pointless details. He killed my father then my mother then stood before my crib and used the death curse but it was reflected and it left this scar while destroying his body and then blah blah blah. There's so much extra in his story it turned from an explanation into a sob story. He just met these people. These people don't care about his feelings. Why are you telling them your feelings about everything? But hey, he mentioned asylums and padded walls like 50 times so at least he covered his bases, right?... |
| That person chapter 16 . 3/14/2019 Even though they are a-dork-able together, heru isn't technically "Harry"... so therefore this is not a Snarry fanfic.. |
