Lover. Lost forever in eternity of rejection and denial. Never to know what she writes. Sheesh you make me sick sometimes you know that? Oi. I need to go pucke excuse me.

WAH!

Holy God, that was so sad! I'm bawling right now. That's it. I officially hate you. Not really. It was awesome. I love sad endings. I love happy endings too, but this was was great.

I was reading the first chappy and I'm like, "Yay, it's going to be a happy one where Aya and Omi can go make happy boy/boy love, and everything will be all peaches and cream" and then 'sweet, little, innocent' Omi had to throw a poisonous dart into my eyeball and I'm left bleeding to death and dying of slow painful torture due to said poison, on the floor. I hate Omi. Not really. But I do, cuz he couldn't get past the fact that they were both guys. Boys are stupid. I think. I wouldn't know, I'm not one... but he couldn't see that they would get even *more* business if all the little fangirls running around found out, because even though they would know they couldn't have either of them, it's so obnoxiously cute that the little chibi and the man of ice are a couple and they so obviously make a better couple than KenxOmi or YoujixOmi (yeech...). So, in this case, Omi is a dumbass. And he's even more a dumbass that he couldn't tell that the tall, dark, handsome, brooding, RED HEAD, was not that of Schwartz ("May the Schvartz be vith you"), but his own Aya, who was dying of a broken heart. But no, he had to twist it more by shooting a fucking arrow into it! I think Omi knew it was Aya all along and he couldn't stand being near him, cuz we all know Omi isn't as innocent as we think he is. After all, he does kill people. So what's one more?

So all in all, this fic shows Omi's true nature, a sick, twisted bastard that likes to get a very sensitive Aya's hopes up and then crushes him like a bug! He's worse than Farfie in my opinion...

But have no fear, the next AyaxOmi I'll read will have Omi back to his innocent self, and I'll only think of this as his innerself, not his true self, though. Because his true self is meant to love Aya and nobody else.

And with that, I bid you adeiu.

It was a wonderful story, and I enjoyed it thoroughly, and I'm glad it didn't have a happy ending, because as much as I don't want to admit it, happy endings are becoming too cliche.

Now I say bye-bye!

~Stars on your Wrist.

OH GOD!

u almost make me cry with all of this .

poor kawaii Aya! why is he always suffering that much!

well... i love ur fic, i needed a dictionary to translate the words i didnt know xDD i speak spanish actually... but i did it great in understanding tha fic! - and a just love it!

oh god, and those kinky moments! even i was blushing xD

and omi / i love that chibi! its my favorite, u make me melt with this omi of yours!

u see.. ive read just the first chap. cause its too late to keep reading _ its 4:48 am! but i was totally in love with the fic

well.. i got excited i just want omi and aya to be together in the second chap! and at in end of the fic... onegai!

bye no da!

Omg...I'm crying...dangit...this is SO sad...:sniffles: ohh man...keep it up man! I wanna know! (it's supossed to me Momaru):sniffles: NOT FAIR!

*totally flabergasted* H-HOW could you do that to aya? Why why why? you are mean that was so mean I cant believe you did that.

damn, that's sad... poor Aya... He's so f*cked up sometimes...

O_O omg you made me cry... *sniffles* that was so good.. poor Aya.. damn Omi! lol.. Write another chapter! make him immortal! lol. _

I'm hurt you didn't tell me about the next part... your proses are too beautiful for your own good, though. Let me know when you update it next, ja? (Because I doubt this will be the end of it).

Please tell me this isn't a one-shot, they have to get back together, I'll die if they don't, this is my all time fav pariing, you gotta get them together.

aw... that was SO COOL. you should definetly continue the story or something! i love Aya and Omi together!

That was such a good story! How do you do that? I feel like I'm living in their pain. The tormented agony of Aya's silence at the end was beautiful, and Omi's lost innocence. Not that he was really innocent before but I don't think Omi will ever get over that heartbreak. The flowers were the perfect touch. Aya's roses, promise of love; and Omi's (self-explanatory) forget-me-nots. Everything tied together beautifully and I love how everything went on as before to everyone else in WieB. Oblivian is lovely. That was such a great story!

~Miia-chan

Beautiful stuff! I hope to see more from you!

I really liked this story, it made me cry in the end