Ryoga murdered Nabiki ?

That’s extremely weak.

Is serious story about revenge and justice and crime. Characters are in, well.. excepting Ryoga. I think their responses are the ones that would be seen

its her goddamn fault honestly your ranma is getting annoying... he needs too release that anger

Ryoga doesn't deserve Love or forgiveness

honestly you had Ranma undrreact gravely & then there were no signs of it too ranma... he was a virgin right? ryoga came inside of him i'm pretty sure he would have saw something when he was washing himself...

Not sure that I understand why Ranma spared him, it is probably a better punishment than just killing him, but considering his threats it seems awfully risky.

Oh, I thought Ryoga wouldn't kill anyone, or did becoming a rapist lead to some more moral decay?

You know this is actually the first Ranma fic I've read where he is sensible enough to even consider abortion, which is a nice change of pace.
What guy wouldn't consider aborting a rapechild in this situation, especially if it forces nine months of womanhood on him, making this story feel a bit more realistic than most out there.

Beautifully done. You captured an element of realistic reactions without changing the characters too unbelievably.

Keep up the good work!

~Angel

Didn't Soun Tendo miss his lost daughter and or Akane and Kasumi go looking for their sibling?

that was a freaky awesome story! i cant wait to read your others!

PLease write a sequel.

This story is too too good to leave with out one.

Not a review of the chapter, just a request ... did you happen to get the name and/or address of the ... (no description sufficiently vile comes to mind) who asked for details of the rape? My seven-foot-tall, 395 lbs (all muscle) redneck baby brother expressed an interest.

no one ever considers an abortion.

[I think that's probably a reflection of the standard expectations of the local culture that the Ranmaverse is based in (although I never got the scenario with 'Ranma', there's never been a good enough reason for _him_ to be pregnant). Abortion may be the standard “birth control” in Russia, but to the best of my knowledge it's not nearly as popular in Japan or China. Part of it, if I understand correctly, is due to the availability/affordability of medical equipment.]

Chapter 2

"The clothes you're wearing sort of gave it away."

Ockham's Razor had finally managed to function in relationship to Ranma's life for one brief shining moment. If Ranma had known what Ockham's Razor was, he'd have appreciated the irony. Assuming he knew what irony was because a fish doesn't notice water until he is removed from it.

[True.]

When he got to the hurting people portion of his plans, the last thing it would be was accidental.

[Dark. I approve.]

Nabiki's relief was as phony as a wooden 50 yen piece.

[Points: 1]

Into the punch, he put all his fury, all his rage, all the anger he had ever felt over the things his father had done to him in his entire life.

[And drew upon the Dark Side of the force. Tomorrow Ranma Saotome will take a Darth name to officially join the ranks of the Sith.]

Ranma was ready to punch first and ask questions not at all

[Points: 1]

Chapter 3

But the martial artist's harmony between mind and body, between himself and the world, was missing. Even worse than missing, in discord.

[With all the emotional trauma, that's no surprise.]

"Go ahead and say ya wanna say.

[say _what_ ya wanna say?]

"Why is it every time I think Cologne's gone senile, she turns right around and proves she ain't?"

"Consider yourself lucky Saotome," Mousse replied. "She's been doing it me most of my life."

[There's something extremely humourous about that.]

Her name tag read 'Dr. Mame Suimono'. But a small round button she wore next to it read 'Honorary Amazon: Do Not Annoy'. Ranma hoped that it was a joke of some kind and feared that it wasn't.

[Now _that's_ funny]

For a procedure that was still technically illegal in most cases, abortions were not uncommon in Japan. The relative lack of contraception options for women guaranteed that. In Japan, it took thirty five years of wrangling and testing before 'the pill' became available to Japanese women for birth control.

[Hmm. 'Didn't know that before - all I could get were violent crime statistics, never anything on the aftermath.]

Sadly, abortion and contraception are not covered by the National Health plan and public assistance funds for either have been tied up in the Diet since before you were born.

[Good detail of modern Japan that I don't often see.]

Now he could face his parents. Now he could kill Ryoga.

[Simple and dark.]

Chapter 5

There is a major disparity between public and private schooling in Japan. Public school students are expected to attend half days of school on Saturdays two or three times per month. Private school students get to keep their Saturdays for themselves. Which explained why Kodachi normally chose Saturday to show up. She didn't have anywhere else she was supposed to be.

[And comes another target to maim in his mind.]

Then she saw his eyes and fear penetrated to the core of her being.

[At the same time, it's odd almost contrived, and yet something I almost expected for Kodachi to look him in the eye and see the madness within.]

Five small holes, three on her breast, two on her back, had burned through the teacher's clothing. Without knowing how they knew, all three understood that Hinako Ninomiya's aura draining ability was gone forever.

[Although the situation is indeed weird, I thought that permanently ending her ability without active manipulation of those pressure points felt outside the realm of suspense of disbelief.]

Second time reading this, and I thought it was well written. Glad I don't know who the insensitive * was who emailed wanting a detailed rape scene, bad enough that it happens without people wanting details.

You were right about the 'Ranma gets raped' fics though, this is the first one I've seen where he wants to and successfully aborts the child. One he wanted to abort, but if he did the curse wouldn't unlock, and another he tried but the curse wouldn't let the child die.

Hope to read more quality fics from you, though maybe not this type.