That was sublime. I love a Dark Harry and Hermione. Truly vindictive when pushed. And the fitting punishment for Umbridge. I thoroughly enjoyed this.

Can u make in to a long story starting how it all begins

Disturbing, but realistic. Thanks

Good one.

That was fantastic! Way to go Hermione; stick up for your Harry.

Great punishment.

A pretty dark story but amazingly written. Confused at first about what Umbridge was doing but understood as soon as she started thinking to herself. Looks like Harry became the next Dark Lord after Voldemort and is more effective at it if anything else. He instilled fear to all parties rather than choose a group and that is what makes people worry. He psychological part of the story was nicely done. Hermione being an assassin was pretty cool. At least she is physically strong enough to move fast and be able to make Umbridge weep.

The torture was good. It is a nice payback for what she did to her Harry. Well at least he fell in love so he can't be all that Dark in my opinion. I can tell that these two are quite strong and Harry being the strongest. Hermione is quite devious as she put that curse on Umbridge. Gonna have a lot of scars if anything. In a way it was sweet and cute as she did it all for Harry and nothing more. Thank you. Keep up the good work.

Loveed it! Anyone who writes dark! Hhr is awesome. THANKS again.

Wow. This is really inventive. Kudos!

Woah...so Umbridge bleeds every time she writes, no matter what quill she uses? AWESOME!

God I love these stories. If only you would write the smut... Or continue it. Whichever you like, or you know both would be great too. ;) but this was an awesome one-shot too.

Ooh dark H/Hr...love it of course!

No less than Umbridge deserves, let the bitch find out what it feels like. I'd be really interested in reading more from this universe, see what happened to everyone else. Did Harry get to kill Dumbles or did he die like he did in Canon?

Great little story, Umbitch is always a favorite target ;-)

Oooh dark!HHR! Love it! :) not much darkHHR going around as far as I've seen, do you have recs? :)