Just found this and couldn't stop reading. Such a wonderful story. Thanks!

Oh, I'm so disappointed this is over!

A simply brilliant piece of imagination. Your characters are so alive, so real and so utterly like themselves, failings and all. First rate stuff. Thank you so much for sharing it with us!

Great story! I loved it!

This was different from your other stories but I highly enjoyed it very much. You have a fine touch for writing and I love your view of the Enterprise characters. I really hope you return to writing them one day. I had printed your stories out and I have been rereading them all week. I could not stop. These stories are a keeper.

I really liked this fanfic. I just found it a little "unfinished"... I would have liked to see what will be next this end. But it's a great story indeed.

"You could never tell with parents. Most of the time, with the trouble kid came trouble parents. Kid burns down the cabin: 'Oh, our Mikey couldn't have been responsible for that.' Or worse yet: 'He's just special.'"

I'm a teacher, and I know how much this is true!

Well, in the case of our Trip he's really special ;)

I like the fanfic, I'm reading it in these days.

I just didn't catch the letter of his parents: what did they write to him that made Jonathan laugh?

I love this story! its so inventive and awesome! :D

An Amazing story and perfect characterizations! This tops as one of my all time favorite Enterprise AU story.

Hi there. I appreciate it's a long time since you wrote this story! I'm working my way through the Tu/R stuff on Fanfic, picking up the stories I haven't seen elsewhere.

This is really great. AU can be difficult to pull off, particularly having the guys as children. I'm impressed how you've managed to keep them recognisably 'our' guys. There characters are different, but you can see how these experiences will change them, and how that change will arrive at the boys we know and love. The story certainly kept me hooked - I've spent the better part of two evenings reading it.

One very tiny canon point, which I expect you know by now anyway: there is no Starfleet Academy in the time of Enterprise. Doesn't really detract from a wonderful story, it's just one of those things that grabs my eyes and attention. I'm a canon nerd, sorry - feel free to ignore!

Thanks again for the entertainment.

Wow! I absolutely loved that story! I can't describe it, but you had me hooked, and every chapter was excellently written!

Rockin good story, y'all did right by Trip and Malcom...

Usually, I don't like AU stories very much. That's the reason I haven't read your story until my friend SitaZ pratically ordered me to do so. And I'm glad I did. It's a great story. Sometimes it had been a little confusing, but I think that is because English isn't my first language. I love the humor that lay underneath every sentence and although I think a twelve-year-old boy wouldn't react like Trip, I enjoyed the story very much. You had me on the edge of my seat most of the time.

I loved the scene with Henry Archer, but it was much too short. I regretted that the story ended here, but I saw that you're writing a sequel. I look forward to read it.

Love from Germany

Gabi

WOW

this is a great story

"First words out of the kid's mouth confirmed Malcolm's darkest fears about him. *American*. If that accent got any more Southern, he'd be speaking Spanish."

I laughed aloud at this.

Nice start.

Just one more note-

You descried migraines very well. I've had them since I was seven or eight and they can defiantly turn you into a quivering heap.

-FPP