| Reviews for Token |
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Sailor Taichichi Vegeta chapter 1 . 2/20/2015 The whole story was a joy to read, but Hughes and Pinako SLEW me. |
animegurl23 chapter 1 . 7/12/2007 that was awesome. ;D it would be more awesome if you had a second chapter. but oh well... |
Desdemona Lefay chapter 1 . 6/12/2007 Your other fic I liked, but THIS I loved. It was SO Al! It's was sweet and all the characters were perfectly themselves. |
Story Weaver1 chapter 1 . 12/16/2006 That was HILARIOUS! And so sweet too. The characterizations are amazing and I couldn't help smiling at the WinAl shipping even though I always liked WinEd. I didn't expect Roy to be the one to give the wining advice. I liked the trickster persona you gave him. The rockabells were very well done |
MoldyMangoes chapter 1 . 5/16/2006 I'm so totally late on the review. But that was hilarious. Cute and very hilarious. |
Archerelf chapter 1 . 12/4/2005 aww that was cute! Winry would be hard to buy for if you really think about it... |
wellduh chapter 1 . 9/3/2005 "A 9-millimeter Barrington Automatic with a custom grip and a tailored holster,” Hawkeye responded without hesitation; she blinked. “And perhaps a pony." Ky eh! That was awesome! I love this entire thing. Cute and hilarious. FMA has to be the only anime that can pull off such a level of cutesyness without being tacky, and you've managed to replicate it perfectly, if not better. Keep at it! |
Fyliwion chapter 1 . 7/17/2005 Aw! I loved it! *giggles* Espeically with Alicia *giggles* she's just so adorable! "miniskirts" *dies in giggles* very nice... |
Hidari chapter 1 . 4/22/2005 Aw, cute and funny! |
Ouatic-7 chapter 1 . 1/23/2005 I guess I always paired Winry with Ed but I see the story definitely wouldn't have worked with Ed. Very sweet but not sickmaking. |
Tobu Ishi chapter 1 . 12/3/2004 You know what? You are an absolutely hilarious writer of romantic humor. And even though I'm personally in favor of golden-eyed great-grandchildren, I was given warm-fuzzies by the cuteness of this pairing as written by you. So nice to see everyone written fantastically in-character for once! Hats go off to you, love. You rock. |
Henrika chapter 1 . 12/3/2004 Loved it. Especially the scene with Hughes' daughter, that was hilarious. Keep writing! |
Hosaki chapter 1 . 11/14/2004 Aw...How sweet! I love it...are you going to continue it? That would be cool! Anyway...This is a really good story! I liked Hawkeye's line, "And a pony" Very funny! Overall, this story ROCKS! Please keep writing! |
Guest chapter 1 . 11/14/2004 Aw... Very cute story - from the opening dilemma to the conclusion, including the not-helping-ness of Al's friends. Really loved the story, though I noticed a few grammar errors - like missing the word working after the"if you could call... at all" bit with Mustang. My favorite part about the story was the way you portrayed each of the characters. |
alessandriana chapter 1 . 9/5/2004 Congrats on the win at AnimeFest! |