Reviews for Token
Sailor Taichichi Vegeta chapter 1 . 2/20/2015
The whole story was a joy to read, but Hughes and Pinako SLEW me.
animegurl23 chapter 1 . 7/12/2007
that was awesome. ;D it would be more awesome if you had a second chapter. but oh well...
Desdemona Lefay chapter 1 . 6/12/2007
Your other fic I liked, but THIS I loved. It was SO Al! It's was sweet and all the characters were perfectly themselves.
Story Weaver1 chapter 1 . 12/16/2006
That was HILARIOUS! And so sweet too. The characterizations are amazing and I couldn't help smiling at the WinAl shipping even though I always liked WinEd. I didn't expect Roy to be the one to give the wining advice. I liked the trickster persona you gave him. The rockabells were very well done
MoldyMangoes chapter 1 . 5/16/2006
I'm so totally late on the review. But that was hilarious. Cute and very hilarious.
Archerelf chapter 1 . 12/4/2005
aww that was cute! Winry would be hard to buy for if you really think about it...
wellduh chapter 1 . 9/3/2005
"A 9-millimeter Barrington Automatic with a custom grip and a tailored holster,” Hawkeye responded without hesitation; she blinked. “And perhaps a pony."

Ky eh! That was awesome!

I love this entire thing. Cute and hilarious. FMA has to be the only anime that can pull off such a level of cutesyness without being tacky, and you've managed to replicate it perfectly, if not better. Keep at it!
Fyliwion chapter 1 . 7/17/2005
Aw! I loved it! *giggles* Espeically with Alicia *giggles* she's just so adorable! "miniskirts" *dies in giggles* very nice...
Hidari chapter 1 . 4/22/2005
Aw, cute and funny!
Ouatic-7 chapter 1 . 1/23/2005
I guess I always paired Winry with Ed but I see the story definitely wouldn't have worked with Ed. Very sweet but not sickmaking.
Tobu Ishi chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
You know what? You are an absolutely hilarious writer of romantic humor. And even though I'm personally in favor of golden-eyed great-grandchildren, I was given warm-fuzzies by the cuteness of this pairing as written by you. So nice to see everyone written fantastically in-character for once! Hats go off to you, love. You rock.
Henrika chapter 1 . 12/3/2004
Loved it. Especially the scene with Hughes' daughter, that was hilarious. Keep writing!
Hosaki chapter 1 . 11/14/2004
Aw...How sweet! I love it...are you going to continue it? That would be cool!

Anyway...This is a really good story! I liked Hawkeye's line, "And a pony" Very funny! Overall, this story ROCKS! Please keep writing!
Guest chapter 1 . 11/14/2004
Aw...

Very cute story - from the opening dilemma to the conclusion, including the not-helping-ness of Al's friends.

Really loved the story, though I noticed a few grammar errors - like missing the word working after the"if you could call... at all" bit with Mustang.

My favorite part about the story was the way you portrayed each of the characters.
alessandriana chapter 1 . 9/5/2004
Congrats on the win at AnimeFest!
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