awesome update soon

please post more. i love this story and its better made than most fanfictions in here

Good story, it's quite unusual to see a DBZ/SM focused solely on the Outer scouts.

That was the end of the entire story? And you posted it all at once? You would have gotten far more reviews for it of you had posted a chapter every other day. All in all, not a bad story.

Now this sounds like a Sailor Moon or Draqgin Ball Z episode. 25 minutes of talking, 5 minutes of fighting. I commend you on another well written chapter. Though a bit drawn out. I look forward to more action.

I'm surprised Vegetta didnt start throwing ki blast at all the racers just to make the race a little more interesting.

Less of the easy life, more action. And maybe a bit more rucos from the boys. Other than that, still good.

Is this enemy from the other world too? Like Raditz? Look forward to finding out who, or what. Wait, you said this was an original enemy, did you? Getting more and more interesting.

I would have thought Pluto could just open a portal and transport them back home. But if she did that, you wouldnt have much of a story, would you?

9 chapter, you need all the reviews you can get. Especially for a good story. I had hoped you would draw out the stay of Goten and Trunks. But its all still good.

Now this sounds like Goten and Trunks. Pleanty of whinning. And eager to show off in front of people. Interesting story! Look forward to more.

Great intro. I'm guessing that there age is about 10-ish? I cant tell. Just a guess. Also, you make Goten sound a little smarter than he actually is. Normally he takes Trunks's word for everything. Other than that, all the characters are portrayed well. Looks good.