Hmm, this was rather intereasting ).

I think it was good but you mabye could have made it a bit longer like you said.

i thought it was goor and you ended it well. alot of oneshots leave you thinking there is gonna be more because of how they finished it and it REALLY anyoing.

Yay! Exactly what I needed to brighten up my day. Best part by far was the dialogue! Tsume just sounds so... Tsume. hahahaha

WRITE STORIES! PLEASE START WRITING STORIES AGAIN!

COME ON MORE! MORE CHAPTERS!):

This made me lol hardcore! I love it, and its so cute. You portrayed toboe and tsume well, good job!

haha this was GREAT! i started laughing when toboe said "what if i dont want a female" and tsume answered "then you really fucked up the system." haha XD the great thing about your ff is that its in character and i can rlly imagine it happening. the ending was cute, but in a funnyish-romantic way, not kitschy or anything. pls write more FFs about them

Woah. I really actually enjoyed this, it was in character, and i could actually see it happening. It was an unique plot, and a very amusing and generally good one at that. Well friggin' done for doing this! This would be pretty entertaining if you continued it, if you haven't already, i'm gonna check in a moment, - but if you continued it, and made Toboe ruin the system everyday by doing something not-normal and eventually driving Kiba to go ape. Keep up the good work! :D

I like! I like! Lol. This was cute!

hehee this was so adorable! man I love it when the mess up the system! XD awesome work!

All I can say is yay to screwing up the system. This was such a cute fic that got straight to the point. I was never too sure about this pairing before but now, after reading this little gem, I'm hooked. Thanks for taking the time to write this.

aw, yay.

that's all.

yes i do recomend ruining the system everyday. actually, don't ruin in, desecrate it. hope you 2 have fun

ah it was so cute!