VERY nicely done. Yours is the best Josh/Donna post-MD fanfic I've read so far. You keep Josh very much in character. You don't stray into sappy territory and yet you still keep him true to his love for Donna. Good job.

That was absolutely fantastic.

The title drew me in and I have to say that it was great. I can't wait to see if you develop this into a full length fic or what. Really beautifully done.

Hey oh man I didn't even remember that was how his father died...this is even bigger now...ok now i'm out of shock...good story!

wonderful!...enough said.

Oh my gosh! That was so good! Write more! Very well written, pov was on target, and the scene between Josh and Donna when she came back was just thoroughly logical, matches up with the characters, and just plain good. Keep going!

This was good. I love Josh's musing about how Donna had stood watching his surgery for so long and then his little "Oh, that's how she did it". Very sweet.