Reviews for Crush II: A family of his own
jodi lenn goslin chapter 3 . 12/18/2015
Make more of hiei and botan and when they have the twins and if their are a boy s or girls and will they have more kids .please make more !
jodi chapter 3 . 12/1/2015
You sould make some more of this .when hiei and botan,s babies are and when they are born
Rogue Darth Skywalker chapter 3 . 8/30/2009
first off: why haven't you updated yet?

this is a good story you got going!

now, i may not like the fact that hiei is way OOC. but it is consistent throughout the story which is good. just add a bit more description to things like during conversations. there is not a lot of detail as to the surroundings and what is going on.

but other than that it is good
Binky1987 chapter 3 . 11/4/2007
Hey,

These were good stories (crush and crush II)...I know you probably haven't updated for ages, but please do. I love it!
bethany chapter 3 . 4/26/2007
I really like it! So, you should have one boy and one girl. and they say that boys always look like their mom and girls look like their dad, that would be really cute. .
Hikari-Kayko chapter 3 . 10/23/2006
OY! C where's the rest? i like this story very much and i can't waite for the action to heat up. i read the prequel to this one only to be disapointed when you had already finished it and i didn't review, so just so you know i liked that story very much too. are you not a native english speaker? i noticed that your grammar was off in the first fic, but it's much better in this one! XD keep up the good work, and update soon pleaz! _

~HIKARi
Lizzy chapter 3 . 4/3/2006
i love it. hiei is so better this way than as a cold-hearted demon. what is the sex of the babies? i would like a girl that looks like botan but with hiei's eyes and a boy that looks like hiei but with botan's eyes. thanks for reading. bye
jocelneoverton chapter 3 . 1/28/2006
yo i luv this fic pulez pdate and want 2 be friends?
ChronicCombustion chapter 3 . 12/26/2005
Oh no. Another twin fic. Oh well, just please PLEASE let at least one of them be a boy. Please?
ChronicCombustion chapter 2 . 12/26/2005
Plea-hea-hease! Let it be a boy! I know that the idea of Hiei with a daughter is a sweet image, but I think he deserves a son.
ChronicCombustion chapter 1 . 12/26/2005
I've read so many fanfics in which Hiei and Botan's baby was a girl, yet I've never seen Hiei with a son. Please let it be a boy.
haraf chapter 3 . 12/21/2005
Update soon! boton/hiei never read one before but your story is great!
Nichelle chapter 2 . 12/6/2005
i read the first part of Crush and loved it! and this is a really different side of the story, and i really like it! This is such a cute story! everyone is so at peace with life in this. i had never really thought of Hiei and Botan together but you make it work, kudos!

as for the baby, it could be boy or girl. with a boy, there would be an even stronger connection with Hiei, and he could grow up being influenced by all the Rekai Tentai, (that could be good or bad lol). If it was a girl that could open up a whole new window of opportunities. i can just imagine how scared his daughter's first boyfriend would be, lol!

again, this is such a sweet, blissful story! great job

~Nichelle
BlueFireIce chapter 3 . 11/1/2005
i like it. it makes me giggle. i would laugh but i don't know how too. I have laughed before but when i find something really funny i can't laugh i only giggl. i don't know. well forget that and let us get back to the story. It was cute and sweet and the second chapter well lets just say the name is a lie. i don't think there is much joy to being pregnat at all. well the outcome of it is cute but that is not the point. i really hope you add more to this story. plz do i love.
funyons chapter 3 . 9/15/2005
its awsome update soon
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