Reviews for Prejudice |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Really good! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Are you gonna continue this sometime soon? |
![]() ![]() Naco, this story is golden. If you polish it up, you'll have a real gem on your hands. You have a really good writing style. Your way with words helps the readers connect with the story. You paint vivid word pictures that I can picture in my mind as I can good sci-fi novels. Very few people have this gift. Keep going, girl. You're doing great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() A goof! Shame on you! This is becoming mysterious and intriguing. And it keeps getting incrementally deeper. Excellent work, keep it coming! (Although, Syd seems to recover from being knocked out rather fast. I guess it's from Des's point of view at that point. |
![]() ![]() Coolies :) |
![]() ![]() Eek! Oh my gosh, you make me feel so loved. I read the author's note at the begining, and I like...jumped out of my chair in surprise :) Well, your welcome! Awesome! *Goes to read next chapter* |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cliffhanger! Will Syd die? Or will she kick some serious clone boo-tay? Stay tuned to find out! Same bat time, same bat channel... |
![]() ![]() ![]() Exciting! Tell me it doesn't necessarily end there! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ah, so it was the Syd clone. But the question remains: Is the clone on her own? (Heh, I rhymed.) Or is some unseen foe after Syd as well? |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ouch. Syd really has it hard, doesn't she? |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is S2D, doing the "Con-tin-ue" chant. Con-tin-ue! Con-tin-ue! Con-tin-ue! Con-tin-ue! Con-tin-ue! Con-tin-ue! Con-tin-ue! Con-tin-ue! |